There was a chaste kiss
That played on our lips
For a moment or two—
To have that kiss
What would a soul that loves those lips not do?
A familiar name
Stayed on our lips
For a moment or two—
To swim in that name
What would a name that loves that name not do?
What was long ago in the heart,
By this life, and this art,
Was a rhyme, a simple one,
That knew whom I had spoken to
When God—who hides from all—was you.
Surazeus Simon Seamount said,
December 12, 2013 at 3:11 pm
I can hear a young woman
in a cathedral with a choir
singing these words to harps and flutes.
thomasbrady said,
December 12, 2013 at 6:07 pm
I don’t think this bashful little poem could stand up to a cathedral choir with harps and flutes, but thank you, Simon.
drew said,
December 12, 2013 at 10:50 pm
It is worthy of a dying fall upon upon the lute…
or perhaps the swoon of a somnolent swan at midnight.
Anyway – I like the poem.
powersjq said,
December 19, 2013 at 1:16 am
A well turned poem, with words difficult to use these days (“chaste” and “God”) put to good use. Conventional treatment of a conventional theme. But highly competent. I enjoyed this.
noochinator said,
December 19, 2013 at 2:35 pm
I’d like to see a poem with the word “shrive” in it. I think Coleridge’s “Mariner” employs it….