INTRICACY

This vista intrigues me the most---
I cannot tell the near and far
of its details. 
My mother had me and now she's a ghost.
The vista's details are far away.
The closest detail is a verdant image---
the cemetery we courted in yesterday.
The feeling of being lost at the college,
forgetting where my classes are,
the semester still warm but half gone,
October's literature, an inky star,
my bare feet ridiculous as I asked,
"Is there a list of student addresses here?"
A blandly friendly woman smiled at my question.
No one could help. Imprisoned by an anxious feeling 
oblivious homelessness was near,
I slowly began to fall in love with nature.
Grasses had never lived in my vistas,
I being an educated human being,
the human stretched by sir or mister.
Nature had always been a yellow forest
vaguely walling off the farther reaches of the vista
where I looked but couldn't look.
Are the walls the same as what is stretching out?
Raphael! Your vanishing point has covered me in doubt.
Perspective end to end.
And now this dream. 
It starts here. Ends there.
The diners were amused I couldn't get out. A dean moved a screen. 
What am I bringing to you?
Pamela, what can I make you see?
Plenty has been replaced by Intricacy.
The near things are indifferent:
O code, O list, O password reminder!
Read my mind! Give them to me!

WHEN I FIGURED OUT YOU LOVED ME

When I figured out you loved me

using the forensic methods of Sherlock Holmes

I turned to Saint Augustine’s Confessions

to tackle the more difficult problem:

I had to figure out if I loved you.

Solving love requires two methods.

The first is relatively easy. I observed small things.

Small bits of data told me I was the one

you desperately wanted to love.

I could tell you feared I wouldn’t approve

without any reason. This indicates love.

But the other kind of love—do I love?

almost drove me mad.

Loving hearts contain no data.

I carefully observed the degree to which I was sad

as I attempted to solve whether I loved Pamela.

Pamela loves me—

facts told me, not poetry.

But my love receives no information. I smiled in my dilemma.

I had time. I could think for a while.

I heard her. I heard the sounds.

Alone, there were no sounds.

All I had was my smile.

SILENCED BY SORROW

The Classical Landscape in Oils — Tallapoosa School of Art

Silenced by sorrow, I didn’t know what to do

except patiently work—in silence—for you.

Silenced by sorrow and no longer brave,

I used what I had—which indifferently they gave.

They were oblivious to me—

silent and speaking only in poetry—

by which you knew—and know me.

Sorrowful, but not silent, the poetry

waits to seize upon a phrase

slightly less sorrowful than these last few days.

Silent before you, my sorrow

hopes to speak without poetry tomorrow.

THE PROBLEM

The problem is in this poem
and that is the problem.

Were it on the street, in the sunlight,
were it in the middle of an argument,
were it articulated by a silly gesture,
it wouldn’t be a problem, but because it’s here,
it’s a problem. The poem is a problem.

Everything obvious is stupid in comedy.
This sharpens thinking.

Do we underestimate the importance of emotion attached to thought?

I noticed the way Christians win arguments.
Can it be that morality is speech itself?

Did I say something to you? I did.
If I might say something about you
in front of your friends?

It is so obvious—life is life—
that this is where the problem ends.

WHEN YOU’RE IN LOVE

When you’re in love with someone

you’re always saying goodbye.

The happiest moments are when you cry,

when you’re in love with someone.

The harm done to you by love is precisely

the punishment you never deserved

precisely because you never meant to be loved.

It is agony enough to love, but when you

see you are loved, too! What can you do?

in this poem, or elsewhere?

when it’s true, it’s true, it’s true, it’s true?

THE BEST THING

What is highbrow? How do we know we are in the presence of the highest in terms of what we understand to be the fine arts, including writing, the visual arts, and music?

The answer is simple. The response will be an emotional one.

Feelings are what great art produces and whatever thoughts or words happen to surface can safely be ignored.

Only one intellectual idea is involved: the strong feelings produced run the gamut from comic to tragic (they vary, dynamically and with purpose) so that even as we respond with strong emotion, we are not aware that here is a piece which is “sad”—or here is a piece which is “funny.” The tragic and comic are both present and support each other, and the way they do this is intentional.

The “joke” may be “sad,” until we get to the punchline—and then we laugh. An ingenious joke (work of art) is both tragic and comic in a similar manner.

We’ve all experienced seeing inferior art in a setting where appreciation is an obligation—perhaps we are looking at a drawing by our child. We are highly aware that as we smile condescendingly, we are feeling no emotion beyond the attempt to show proper appreciation. This, too, however, is an emotion. This sort of emotion—any emotion (except perhaps actual disgust) potentially belongs to the work of art’s effect, as long as the artist has intentionally made us feel that way. And it helps that we are wholly aware of this intention.

If we laugh at what was supposed to be sad, the art fails. If we do not laugh at what was supposed to be funny, the art fails.

If we laugh and know, as we laugh—or weep, and know, as we weep—that this is the artist’s intention, the art succeeds.

The formula is astoundingly simple, despite the attempt by stupid people to make it more complex.

We might expect the formula for the appreciation of the greatest art to be more complex, but it is not. Do not let the stupid fool you.

I have even erred myself by making it seem more complex than it is, forced to use crude examples—the metaphor of a “joke,” and terms such as “comic” and “tragic”—in order to get my extremely simple point across.

I said the formula is simple. But it can be bent, twisted, elaborated on, embellished,

The truth is white light, colored by various hues, the combination of which, is the art. The truth can be funny or sad, depending on who is expressing it—the truth is not finally the matter at all (any fool can blurt out the truth) but how the funny and sad combine emotionally.

It is instructive that things can be funny and sad at once—that this is so, most of us are dimly aware. How it is so, and how it is made so, belongs to the skill of the artist, who doesn’t so much use paint or words but ply the tickle created by discord together with eternal sighs of harmony.

The truth—super-obvious by its very nature—if even allowed a mention (it tends to ruin any project before the necessity we entertain for that project appears), is no doubt present, even as the artist is superior only for being superior at hiding it.

The most devastating criticism of something serious is simply to laugh at it.

This “criticism” is used by the greatest artists as part of their artistic trade. They secretly laugh (within their art) at whatever serious matter they unfold, in order to be critic-proof, and the by-product of this, in the hands of the skilled, is interesting art. The inferior artist, using this trick, produces buffoonery. And even then, the crazy, acting defensively, secretly self-mocking, may, in rare instances, be accidentally good.

Aldous Huxley, as critic, was vaguely aware that he had caught Edgar Poe carelessly using this trick—the rhythms of “Ulalume,” Huxley felt, were comic, and therefore entirely ruined the poem’s tragic theme. Huxley mercilessly and condescendingly mocked Poe’s well-known work.

Whether Huxley is correct, or not, goes to the whole heart of the matter.

The great artist mixes contrary emotions well.

The bad artist doesn’t attempt a mixture at all, or does it badly.

Huxley didn’t make this point. He didn’t allow that Poe could be funny and sad at the same time (both funny and sad is mad?). He simply took Poe to be serious, nothing but serious (the way some people don’t like Beethoven or most classical music because it sounds to them like ‘funeral music’). Those who love Mozart hear tears and laughter by turns, shocked by how the “music” is nearly secondary to the emotional fluency and expression.

There is crude madness and refined madness—great art is the latter.

Huxley’s skewering of Poe (a Modernist, over-thinking sport, perhaps) was reprinted in a textbook anthology by editors belonging to the New Critics, a circle led by John Crowe Ransom, the best Modernist critic there was (tied with Eliot, perhaps).

Modernism, for Ransom, sought to escape the crude mixing of the old literature—the moral (lemon) with entertainment (sugar) producing “lemonade,” is how Ransom put it.

We moderns mix more radically, Ransom said; table salt tastes nothing like its two elements, sodium (NA) and chloride (CL).

Ransom didn’t get into the morals at all; his point was merely how well the mixing was done.

To this point of his: I, of course, agree. But some Modernists tend to think nothing subtle was done in the past—an inhibiting approach.

The mixing is all. The mixture has nothing to do with morals (except as coloration) in neither the great works of the past or in the better works of the present.

Dante, and other great artists, produces emotion in the way I have described—a variety of feelings simultaneously introduced, rigorously and intentionally.

This is as moral or intellectual as great art gets. And Ransom would agree—the truth (what some might call the ‘meaning’ or the ‘moral’) is hidden.

The New Critics’ most forceful doctrine was: no summary or paraphrasing of a poem is able to come near the poem itself—especially in its operation, as we actually experience it (emotionally).

No “criticism” of great art is possible. One cannot say “what” the Divine Comedy is “about.” To say what it is intellectually would be a lie. One has to read it. Maybe not finish it, if it is too long. But, at least, experience parts of it.

Yes, the same can be said of a stain on the sidewalk. So we must be careful. We must be sincere when we appraise art.

One can “review” the Divine Comedy, or “Ulalume,” isolating elements, comparing passages, remarking on grammar, rhythm, and the kinds of simple feelings (sad, funny) which are invoked. But what the work is, in terms of truth, cannot be articulated, and the better the work, the more this is so.

The great work of art is a joke inside a joke inside a joke, which ends up being not funny. Or a tragedy which makes us laugh. And both of these at once. As Poe put it, it’s never about the moral but the moral in motion. This radical and dynamic mixing perhaps flies in the face of Eliot’s “objective correlative,” but the truth is, Eliot is more subtle than this concept, which he introduced haphazardly, in attempting, remember, to radically reassess the past—a fad belonging to all of Eliot’s intellectual circles, beginning with Ruskin’s Pre-Raphaelites.

But what about the student who says, “Tell me what it means, professor! Then I will have feelings about it just as you do! Yes, the moral and the truth are hidden. But you, sly dog, know what the truth and the moral are—so just tell me!”

What do we say to this? Doesn’t a question like this make our highbrow subtlety seem a bit—dishonest?

Yes and no. If the art is indeed great, we should be able to “teach” it so it becomes emotionally real to the student. But most of what we would be “teaching,” would have nothing to do with the art in question—but rather with life, which underlies the art, or, with other works of art, for comparison with the art work in question.

The student is not “feeling it” because of general things—not because the masterpiece under consideration is intentionally obscure. The student, simply by trusting his or her feelings, “understands” the masterpiece much more than they realize. One needs to know the rules of chess to appreciate chess. One needs to know the rules of life to appreciate great art. Any soul can be taught a grounding of this, gradually, for free.

As I have pointed out, the formula is simple. All that’s necessary is a democratic society and a good heart. Experts and priests are not necessary.

A LITTLE NIGHT

What the French call “a little night”

when we put all our affections into a small place;

and you know yes it is easy

to feel enormous pity for the distant suffering you witness.

Your tiny heart feels more distress

than they felt in all of Paris in 1953.

We need to put you to bed. And later you can write a poem

for the sufferers you will never meet.

Where have you come from? And who are you?

You swept this poet off his feet.

EXCEEDINGLY GOOD

My life is exceedingly good. I don’t care

when referees fix games. I stare

at newspapers. I read the far-away air.

I don’t gamble. “Yes? What do you want?”

is the way I respond to the world. I don’t do

a lot of things which the talented do—

who get dragged into dionysian schemes

which shorten their lives. Lurid dreams

of things done strangely by businessmen,

who build clanging music and now try and do it again.

Failures. The new fads are crushing the old.

My record collection? “I’ll give you a penny.” Sold.

People hate that music now. They once died

to hear it. My life is exceedingly good. OK, businessmen lied.

The games were fixed. Nothing was true.

They argue over lists. Nerds. What do you want me to do?

Salesmen descended on the greatest nation on earth.

What do you think the apocalypse is worth?

The business leaders are plotting harder now.

Death, I heard, is the latest cash cow.

The death of cows, according to government leaders

will make life better. I got it. Understood.

Jealous because I have it exceedingly good?

I’m too happy. I get it.

Give me your idea. I’d like to pet it.

THE LOOSENING

Strindberg went right over his head.
He had driven, in his black, GPS EV.
I was sitting in the audience with him,
watching my son perform
in the university play;
he was with my daughter,
a film major at a different school,
the one where I doggedly work,
when I'm not writing doggerel.
My wife sat on the other side.
I had moments to explain the Strindberg---
hypocrisy symbolically exposed---
but my wife (we met in the theater) 
has a sticky personality 
and changes the subject every five seconds.
I felt helpless and distant and old.
But I drank the Strindberg
and to hell with them! 
if they didn't get it!
if they only wanted to gossip!
I recalled my college theater youth
when we were surrounded afterwards by actors and audience,
waiting for my son to come out,
there he is!
flouncing men, tight groups of absolutely beautiful women;
actor make-up and costume gone,
the young people who had been on stage
now appearing in the swirl,
the superficial profundity of the theater
like the warmest of brief baths.
It was a loosening,
though nothing happened,
and, of course, evil and deceit continue,
time marches on, 
and Strindberg is in his grave.


AFTER WE LAMENTED

After we lamented what had hurt us,
our anger strengthened our resolve.
Touched to the core by human suffering,
we found we could not love.
We found we could not love.

We listened to Pound all night
and then, the next evening, we heard the news.
Nazis invaded the poems of Auden,
invented stories with rumors. 
The rumors of the delta blues.

First we witnessed the 20th century.
Then, we stopped keeping track.
Atrocities filmed in films stayed there,
but the audience kept coming back.
The audience kept coming back.

The dionysian aspects of their stardom
prevented the truth from being told.
The music said whatever it wanted,
but the journalists were bought and sold.
The journalists were bought and sold.

I came out of it intact,
smiled shyly inside my poetry.
My life went by nicely,
but then came the focus on me.
But then they focused on me.

They asked if I would do something.
They knew what they asked, and then,
when I pretended I hadn't heard---
they softly asked me again.
They asked me, softly, again. 


WHEN I PEEK

When I peek at my emotions, they laugh at me,

as my girlfriend did in 2003.

We were tourists on the Champs-Elysees.

I was in a wholly anxious mood that day.

And later, on the same subject, when she cried,

I thought, “was it her—or her emotions—which lied?”

Emotions will rescue us from thought—

in my life, a good emotion had been long sought.

I had been too timid, but experience at last

revealed the sad emotional error of my past.

My melancholy had kept me from thoughtful action—

instead I scrutinized the forms of attraction

in the most powerful aesthetic manner—

a lover! a tune! I heard one giggling around every corner.

Whole notes were in the wind. I heard quarter notes descending

in random gatherings of trucks and men,

a melody in every noise, and so far

poems overflowing the trunk of every used car

tell me what everyone is thinking, and who they are.

I’ve been punched, disdained by the smart;

a wheel was shouting on my broken shopping cart.

I looked at you blankly. You smiled. I winked and tapped my heart.

Vaguely inappropriate. Specifically, a poem began to start.

IDEALISM

Idealism was my favorite type of literature in school.

I don’t think they teach it any more.

Friedrich Schiller? Goethe’s friend, who died young?

The English panting, on their fervent Italian tour?

The ruins of previous ages decorating the nineteenth century scum

of tumultuous industry, the sheer excitement of everyone?

Science, friend of nature? Prodigies? Limitless oils and violin?

Chastity? Romanticism? Benjamin Franklin?

Sylvia Plath? No. It was “Can do, can do.”

Practicality was also true.

Mary Shelley and Frankenstein.

Byron. English majors were rock stars.

Poets on picnics had the best damn time.

What happened? Where is that conversation?

Where are those poems? That plot?

Aw hell. Don’t tell me the bad real exists

and the fake good does not.

I DIDN’T DO ANYTHING

In the last happy years of my life

I took walks, including to the grocery store,

enjoyed being at home. I never tried to contact you.

I didn’t do anything. I was happy. Does this mean

I am good? Do I have a good soul? You

wanted to punish me, but could not. I was

too content; my revenge had been

a one time thing; harmless, really,

but effective. You weren’t able to get me.

And my love for you gradually faded

as I dreamed and wrote poems.

I used to be restless, looking

to see where the party was; I surprised myself

by how mellow I became. I didn’t do anything.

Even in my wild days, when wheels turned

beneath me, the wheels were active, not me.

I didn’t do anything. The follies

of my youth didn’t hurt anyone. I wrote letters

and cards and received letters and cards

that were quickly forgotten. Now, on my death bed,

in the hospital, looking out the window, occasionally

thinking of you, I finally must admit I’m slightly

unhappy. Yesterday, all at once, someone in the next room,

an old person who is probably also

on their death bed, began to sing.

I lay there listening. I didn’t do anything.

THE SOUL IS SO INVISIBLE

The soul is so invisible

it wasn’t found in the old,

holy times, the old men reading scripture,

or, silent in the desert, hungry, delirious,

no one saw the soul; nor did it manifest in

ancient parchment or in a cough

in the hours before dawn, in running water

no one ever saw the soul. It wasn’t in

poetry or times of great comfort, even in laughter,

pure laughter, or the skilled, miraculous

feats by men and women, even in hallucinations

when knowledge formed into clear

pictures and understanding, nor in

children or the sight of animals, in very odd feelings,

nor in love, in her when she loved,

or in cries of ecstasy; the sun; the cool stars.

It has never been seen in the part or in the whole.

You were looking for life.

You weren’t looking for the soul.

PALESTINE

Someone (it’s a secret) started a fire.

There is one cure against the cancer of empire.

The United States. Palestine is special (dire?)—

the victim of the Roman Empire and the British Empire.

Give your soul to Jesus or the mighty God

you choose (or that chose you)

but happy are they

in life when empire does not come their way.

TITANIC

Never in history had fate been so confronted

by the comfortable who now confronted,

from the height of their comfort, the dark

and freezing sea. The passengers contemplating

going down is impossible to convey in poetry.

Spread out, life-boats, on rescue bent, dimmed,

one by one, their lanterns, to not be seen,

that reasonable fanatics, warmly dressed,

freezing and drowning from the sinking,

would not, in their despair, overwhelm

women and children held up narrowly.

Soon, through the dark, rescue came,

drawn by morse-code’s help help help help help.

Oh calm night of frigid air,

now felt by Titanic’s anguished crew.

Hot and arrogant, they would not stop

when a sister ship in icy waters similar

signaled: we have stopped, will you?

The builder of the ship wasn’t captain

nor on the ship taking messages. The builder,

helplessly on board, said, “two hours

and we go down”—everyone ignored that, too.

One hysterical survivor cried, “Some were saved!

Some were saved! All I can say is some were saved!”

Nothing will ever be different.

What do you think will happen to you

beneath the dim (and undimmed) stars?

LIFE’S A PLACEBO

Life’s a placebo; nothing helps nor harms.

You worried and calculated for nothing.

Life’s a placebo. The wreck they pulled you from,

loss of memory, that time you starved,

the numerous diseases and so-called cures,

broken love and the steps you took not to die,

arrogance and indifference which drove you insane?

That was your manufactured joy and pain,

your soul’s hallucinations all along.

Everything you do? Your soul laughs.

And when you are judged by the moral court at last,

your soul will be laughing,

just as it laughed in the past,

laughing, laughing, laughing,

the world immortal at last.

THE LONG, PLEASANT PUNISHMENT

Horrified by my sin and her

(she was the whole reason for the sin),

I decided to be good; said goodbye

and in my long, pleasant punishment

wrote to her as I knew her to be,

and in this exercise, found my poetry.

Impossible, I knew for us to meet,

sweet the secret, the secrecy, sweet;

my writing had the urgency of understanding,

passion, penitence, hope, even the occasional sting

of rebuke. I could say whatever I wanted,

but it was poetry for the penitentiary.

She could not forgive me

and therefore it was pure, it had to be pure,

it had to be poetry. I learned what poetry meant

in only being itself, as life became

my long punishment.

I called it “pleasant” above. It really wasn’t.

I gleaned this insight, too, which only now I glean—

obvious—and yet I hope readers will know what I mean.

A lover truly wants someone who will not want them

for reasons unconsciously practical,

leading, of course, to tormenting heart ache.

Beware, beware. No matter what you do, your heart will break.

IF MY POETRY MAKES YOU FAMOUS

If my poetry makes you famous

all the credit should go to you—

the best poetry follows

what lovers do.

When the poem lies down

it is because you did so

in sweet proximity of me.

There is a tumbling of delicate nuances

thanks to you, in my poetry.

You did it all. The stretched observances.

The hasty patience inside my reflections.

The sorrow because you can’t be seen here.

Every cause that’s mine belongs to you.

Naturally, the effect, too.

The flame of your skin is neither blue nor brown.

The shadows of my poetry joined life

in this life, when I watched you lie down.

A DAY

A misty, warm, autumnal day.

The ripe wishes to stay.

But say goodbye to Keats. AI

has a greater memory and a sharper eye.

The data says autumn will be gone

and change will come to every lawn,

the late daisies which extend themselves under clouds

in front of old, decorous houses,

the piles of that miniature, papery yellow leaf,

a cheery slaughter which mitigates grief,

the languorous grass and puffy flowers.

Summer hoards its shortening days.

Autumn hesitates to give away its hours.

I have been trapped in a day like this before;

unexpected beauty surprised me. You

belong to that category. But you are no more

and every shape that fills

my eye today will renew the core

red look of these eternal hills.

LONGEVITY

Longevity, longevity, longevity.
Longevity is plain as it rolls along the plain.

Longevity defies erasure 
with habitual dull.
The marks are centrally 
steady and still.

Longevity isn't about disgrace.
The same veins on its arms,
the same inscrutable, slightly puffy face,
annoying but beautiful in the same odd way,
seeking platitude by night, the long, dull longing by day.

What do you think of longevity's length?
Is it cowardice or strength?

Longevity's regrets pile up.
The cracked, familiar teacup
might be good for tea. 
Or paperclips fill it up.

Longevity is stress-free,
dreaming on tedium 
for its poetry.

Longevity shall not---but is---me.
Longevity has various lives. They all
see mute life flee---thru lenses 
too thick and too small.

Longevity's paragraphs 
tend to go on and on and on.
The old poet admires the pawn
snatched just before it turns into a queen.
A game of slowness and skill!
Something about longevity is never seen.

Raise a glass to longevity!
It was all for the poetry.
I smiled for my safety.
I was calm and steady.
You'll never know. I am ready.
I have the reflexes of a cat.
I was captured by brevity.
I waited and waited for you.
For you. Only you.
Longevity.


SCARRIET ON THE LATEST THEORIES OF POE’S DEATH, AI DANGERS, AND LITERARY OBJECTIVITY

IT’S OCTOBER, warm and cold, windy and gold, in New England. The most important month for Edgar Poe historians, as the anniversary nears of Poe’s mysterious demise, October 7, 1849. To the few in the know, Poe was the good guy, murdered and slandered by the bad guys (it would take too long to explain, but trust me). The craven kick Poe to this day. Why Jill Lepore, why?

THE LATEST ON POE

“Poe had been derailed by a familiar problem, alcohol, but Sartain [extremely unreliable Philadelphia witness born in England] was unaware of this as he contemplated the agitated Poe before him.”

The latest is from a guy from Ohio, Mark Dawidziak, who joins the Smear-the-Literary-Lion club with this year’s Poe biography, A Mystery of Mysteries, which crudely repeats old libel, sending Poe studies backwards in the blink of an eye. With all the new information available, Dawidziak informs us America’s greatest genius was done in by alcohol. (Eye-roll) He specifically refutes the work of John Evangelist Walsh (Midnight Dreary: The Mysterious Death of Edgar Allan Poe 2000) without offering any facts, any logic, or any new research himself. A good biographer carefully contextualizes all the testimony on Poe. The fly-by-night bios simply report hearsay which fits the narrative that Poe was an unreliable drunk—and that’s it. Dawidziak, in the latest addition to the Poe biographical literature, drops the ball. (He never had the ball.) His curious, skeptical, detective, meter, on a scale of 1 to 10, registers a 0. Elizabeth Oakes Smith, a highly respectable author and contemporary of Poe’s, says Poe’s death was caused by a “beating.” John Walsh builds on this theory—Dawidiziak, without counter-evidence, contends Poe just had this tendency to get morbidly drunk. Dawidiziak takes the side of Poe’s detractors. Out of pure perversity, it seems. Does Dawidiziak mention Elizabeth Oakes Smith? Nope. He does no research. Throughout the book, after citing a fact or an incident, there’s no follow-up. He passes over things in silence. Is this his attempt to seem…reasonable? He brags that he talked to a number of Poe museum curators. He’s a middle-brow journalist. Mark from Ohio has merely typed up a book on Poe—to make some money. Well, these are hard times.

THE AI QUESTION

“the real threat to authenticity and originality is not machines…”

Below I respond to a FB post by Kai Carlson-Wee reacting to Atlantic magazine’s AI lawsuit piece (writers claiming they are special because their books are apparently the only ones feeding the great AI monster.)

First, Carlson-Wee:

Yeah, it bothers me that AI ingested my book to train itself on poems, but I’m not worried about the plagiarism claim.

AI algorithms are taught to replicate consistencies, medians, generalities, so they will never be able to create the associative plasticity of the imagination. They will be able to parody, but not invent.

Even future AI will not be able to create out of Experience, which is what bends all art toward Truth.

Just like in Blade Runner, there will always be a tell.

I’m much more worried about actual human writers who copy style, imitate other writers’ voices, and go around ripping off their contemporaries. This kind of deception (so common among writers) is more harmful and damaging than AI will ever be. The real threat to authenticity and originality is not machines, it’s other writers who create out of a lack of personal vision. Does AI pose an existential threat to artists and writers? Yes, definitely, but it’s a threat we already live with (theft, plagiarism, etc).

Maybe the benefit of all the outrage and hand-wringing will be a deeper appreciation for the authentic voice, which is already an amalgam of various influences, but is transformed by human Experience and attention into something organic, projective, true. Is this the end of cardboard prose and romance novelists? Probably. But is this the end of literature? No way.

Here’s a link to the Atlantic article with a list of the books used:

https://www.theatlantic.com/technology/archive/2023/09/books3-database-generative-ai-training-copyright-infringement/675363/

I don’t really argue with Carlson-Wee.

Here’s my Scarrietific take on AI:

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AI cannot touch Keats if you know Keats.

Any AI attempt to replicate Keats will seem fake to you. For the simple reason that you have memorized, or know intimately, the Keats oeuvre. A poem with a “Keats theme” or a “Keats vocabulary” might be written by AI or a human—even sincerely! But it won’t be Keats. It can be argued that this is, in fact, the entire sum of literary study. Everything else is just reading—or buying and selling.

This is why we have a canon of authors which populate our syllabus, and we have learned not so much works, but authors.

I agree with Wee that machines are not the problem.

Plagiarism, it is important to note, existed before AI, and will always exist, and will always overlap in general with influence and homage, to some extent, but as long as we know our authors, plagiarism will do little harm. A really good author (and there are not many) demands we know, to some extent, all of their work.

An author who produces one good work is probably not worth studying, and most likely plagiarized, to some extent, that one impossible work.

We just need to identify the true genius and keep our eyes on them (as literature has traditionally done). This will neutralize AI and all pale imitation.

Wee’s argument that biology influences humans, but not AI, is a powerful one, and a real one, but finally will not, alas, protect us against AI.

Keats (as we know Keats) is dead and has no biology. “Keats” as it now exists, legitimately, is without biology. This is both the sadness and the advantage of “Keats” as we now know him.

As I see it right now, this is our only true defense against AI: “Keats, Keats, Keats.”

If AI sounds like a genius to you, why resist AI? What’s the problem?

Well, it will always be a “problem” to some, one too big and overwhelming to handle. An actual Canon of Authors is the only “defense” possible.

Secondly, my confidence, personally, is based on one fact. AI is not at a disadvantage because it doesn’t draw from “experience” or “biology.” Well, it is a disadvantage, but it’s the nature of writing itself that this is not a disadvantage. The one great disadvantage AI faces (and we should never forget this) is that AI cannot appreciate. It can form and copy and re-combine, endlessly, but it cannot do so with pleasure. Its inability to appreciate is what condemns it to the machine world forever. It will never rival human imagination for this sole reason, a reason so obvious, we may miss it for that very reason.

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THE QUESTION OF LITERARY OBJECTIVITY

“The more educated, the less objective.”

This FB thread starts with remarks by Jon Stone, professor:

“Prompted by a perfectly civil exchange on Twitter: to what degree do you feel your judgement of the quality of a poem (or any other piece of media, I guess) is or needs to be objective? Are you content that it makes sense/means something to you personally, or do you feel that it undermines your judgement if the rest of the world doesn’t agree?

And do you feel you can explain your tastes to some degree, or are they deeply mysterious even to you?”

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The excitement really begins with my first response. Imagine all the usual “objectivity is impossible but we can try” replies and then reading this:

Me: “The more educated, the less objective. Those with no education are very objective. Ever notice that? They’ll call out the piddle the educated adore—and the uneducated are usually correct. It is, finally, piddle. The uneducated won’t dare take a swing at Milton, but they’ll glance at WC Williams and shrug. The aspiring-to-be-educated will favor Williams, because they implicitly understand to “learn” is to lose objectivity. The educated are dimly aware of this objective sphere inhabited by the uneducated, but they’re too educated to embrace it. The genius (rare) is a different animal. Truly educated and ruthlessly objective. The genius goes beyond, travels out of the atmosphere. It’s bracing and beautiful, I’ll tell you that.”

Naturally, all hell breaks loose.

Stone:

“I don’t really follow this at all — I would say that to the uneducated, Milton is just an insipid drone, barely even bordering on sense. That’s certainly the first impression he made on me. Those who ‘won’t take a swing at him’ are just educated enough to understand and respect canonicity — they’re unlikely to read or genuinely enjoy Milton but they appreciate the effort it takes to write thousands of orderly lines about big subjects and they see him as one who holds up the tapestry of civilised culture.

I would say that becoming more educated than that involves two processes — one is developing more ‘sophisticated’ tastes, a process which you are right to be cynical about, as it so often means distancing oneself from ordinary tastes on principle and, as you suggest, buying into a more obscure, more subjective framework. But there is also the process of expanding and deepening one’s capacity for enjoyment, becoming more alive to more than can be done with words on a page, and this is probably just as like to lead to people rating Williams as the first process.

I don’t really believe in genius — there are poets whose work I find easy to like or understand, but not a single one where I haven’t relied on my education or imagination in discover something truly impressive. I don’t think that anything in the canon of poetry would survive a lack of education. Nursery rhymes maybe!”

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Mark Granier:
“The more educated, the less objective.” — Thomas Graves
“I love the uneducated.” — Donald Trump

You’re in great company.

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First, I take care of Stone:

“deepening one’s capacity for enjoyment” —a false assumption by the educated, that becoming less objective heightens pleasure. Quite the opposite. This is part of the burden borne by the educated—separated from the honest, immediate, sense-experience of the uneducated, the educated’s misery is in direct ratio to the matter described. The uneducated is lose-win; the genius is win-win, the educated is lose-lose.”

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Warming up to Granier, my first reply to him is merely:

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Cathy Thomas-Bryant weighs in: “Thomas Graves I find your assertion that the uneducated are objective quite bizarre. Are you using the word ‘objective’ in an unconventional way?”

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Jon Stone attempts to defend himself:

I appreciate the effort put into this reply compositionally, but like most artful aphorisms, it’s really quite nonsensical. No amount of education separates a person from their “honest, immediate, sense-experience” — it merely gives them the means to further explore their relationship to whatever has provoked that experience, and to exercise some agency in shaping the experience. In the case of poetry, as with many other things, this allows them to perceive form, symmetry, music and meaning where at first blush there is just gibberish.

PS. I don’t mean ‘nonsensical’ pejoratively (so far as it’s possible to not mean it pejoratively); I just mean that again, I can’t follow it at all as logic or as an explanatory account.

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Leaving Stone be for a minute, I attempt to historically clarify:

“I do recall some who linked New Formalism in the 80s with Reagan. I suppose among intellectuals, there will always be outlandish attempts to prove fellow intellectuals, with whom one differs, to be “shallow, not truly intellectual”—in 2023 I’m inviting this by defending the uneducated (how quickly I was bizarrely associated with Trump!) and now Ms. Thomas-Bryant utters “bizarre!” the way someone of a 19th century sensibility might have greeted some free-verse proclamation by an Eliot or a Pound. I can only warn my educated friends: don’t overthink my point—by “uneducated” I mean just what the word denotes, but we shouldn’t assume by “uneducated” I mean deluded, or stupid.”

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Reflecting a bit, I return to Stone:

“You have a great deal more faith in the sharpening and grounding powers of education than I do. Education, by its very nature, is unfortunately more likely to be common than exotic, and more prone to hide true insight than unearth it—especially when the education involves that which is apparently impractical (poetry). I doubt those crying “objectivity is impossible!” would say otherwise.

It is impossible for me to take offense. Allowing the uneducated into the room, as I have done, forces us (the educated) to “make sense” in specialized terms, which, in the end, needs rescuing by the uneducated—they were invited for a reason.”

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Now Cathy Thomas-Bryant returns fire:

“I don’t think that the uneducated are deluded or stupid. There just doesn’t seem to be any connection to objectivity. That’s what I find bizarre. It’s as if you said that the uneducated were responsible for fruit, or better at world building, or something else that requires a leap you haven’t explained.”

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And more “humor” from Mark Granier:

“Also, the uneducated are all left-handed, as are all objectively minded people; the more education one receives, the more one tends to favour the subjective (i.e. right) hand. This is well known.”

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I respond to Thomas-Bryant:

“Let’s put it this way. I assume by your response, you agree objective judgment is possible. You just don’t see what it has to do with education. That’s your educated self saying that.”

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And then to Granier:

“Your spoof depends upon a binary, but I’m arguing from three, remember. Uneducated (primitive sense-experience, objectivity) Educated (pride combined with prejudice strongly imitative) and Genius (objective, learned, nuanced, counter-intuitive).”

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Thomas-Bryant clarifies her position for me and then ends with a taunt:

“I don’t believe that objectivity is possible at all, as I say in a reply to a comment upthread. But regardless of my thoughts and beliefs, you have still said nothing to explain or support your idea that the uneducated are more objective. You aren’t going to, are you?”

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“Cathy Thomas-Bryant That’s nice to know. Since you don’t acknowledge objective judgment, it therefore follows you will not comprehend considerations of the phenomenon downstream from the thing itself. Why should you? How can you? I did give a very concrete example. The truly unlearned will always reject piddle which the educated admire—WC Williams, for instance. But if you don’t adhere to objective truth and your education has convinced you to admire piddle, your lack of understanding is the very proof of my argument. This explains not only your incomprehension but the outright hostility of a Granier, for instance, belonging to the drama going back to Socrates at Athens.”

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This is too much for Thomas-Bryant:

“Thomas Graves I was correct – you aren’t going to support or argue your case. Ok, I’m out of this one.”

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Stone responds to me (and Bharat, another person in the thread):

“Thomas – “You have a great deal more faith…”

It’s not faith; it’s experience. I remember having little insight, little idea of what I was looking at or what sense to make of it, and the process by which I came to enjoy and understand more was education — both formal and informal.

But it’s more that I don’t believe, as you seem to do, that the uneducated get anything out of Milton. Or Byron, for that matter. They’re far more likely to enjoy Williams, who is brief and comical. Who reads Milton and Byron??

Bharat — I don’t think you and I disagree in the way you think we do. You say, “I think a good education is ideally a refinement and sharpening of capabilities latent in all of us, even if only as possibility”, and that is my position too. If you are reading widely, you are educating yourself. A lay person can view art and bring their own experiences to it, but there can be no doubt that reading around art will broaden their understanding and appreciation of it, simply because it gives them the benefit of other perspectives on it.

My position here is in a sense very simple: if you study something and listen to what others have to say about it, you will learn more about it and deepen your own relationship with it. The opposite idea — that you know and see more the less you bother to consider something — seems to me just wilfully silly.”

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I bid Thomas-Bryant adieu:

“As expected. Good luck!”

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I turn back to Stone:

“In your “experience,” have you ever seen the “educated” become dumber? And more defensive, narrower, arrogant, thin-skinned, and resentful, as a result? I have. I’m sure many have. Let me add an example for you of what I’m trying to get across: You have an illiterate person who owns inventive speech, is inventive, can imitate voices and attitudes well, and so forth. A very entertaining and honest person. Put next to this illiterate, you have a bookworm who owns multiple advanced degrees in literature—specialization, Shakespeare. Unfortunately, he’s a dull, humorless fellow. Who is closer to Shakespeare? The illiterate? Or the highly educated person?”

Stone pretends not to understand my example. The thread ends.

To sum up:

One: Poe continues to be dumped on in the popular press.

Two: The fatal flaw of AI is that it cannot appreciate. An simple, brilliant, optimistic observation for our gloomy era.

Three: Education makes one less objective. This is almost a truism—we fall in love as we see our beloved less and less objectively. My point speaks philosophically on the nature of knowledge itself. The thread wasn’t up to it (I’m not sure why no one could understand me). And the final example I give really seals the deal—the illiterate who can brilliantly mimic others as more like Shakespeare than the humorless Shakespeare scholar. The idea deserves more discussion.

Salem MA 10/3/2023

I IMAGINED A HOLIER MUSIC

I imagined a holier music

but life jangles, doesn’t it,

even when robed women participate.

Six hours preparing a dress and plate,

the gentle fires of tradition lit

in the cages meant for them,

the weather with the instructions fit—

but where is the lesson the holy God

learned, facing her smiling expression?

Eating is the highest pleasure. All night

we ate. Or is it the scalding water

pleasuring the itching skin?

When did pleasure lose its holiness?

When did kissing become a sin?

When did the natural canopy, the natural settings,

the holy oven for the bread,

become an excuse to jangle?

I apologize to the one high God.

What was that far-away music in my head?

ALL OF LIFE LACKS A POINT

We quietly tied the knot and quietly remain,

hating what keeps popping up in the mind.

I should probably tell this to you now,

but this lovely, frantic, wedding is too loud:

All of life lacks a point.

Life narrows to a point which is nothing,

the most meaningful moment of the wedding,

the moment inside the moment

when the kiss and its loyal aftermath—

did you miss the point?

The point’s location, a location, nothing,

a point we look for where the points stop—

or is it momentum forever?

The wedding speakers had us weeping

when they wept with nostalgic points they made

which I won’t remember exactly

except as contemplation occupying a shade.

Will you sign the guestbook, poet?

Tell us what the point is.

The point of the pyramid, a microscopic shape

magnified crudely in a model,

equivalent almost to “darling, I’m here!”

No moment can hold a sorrow so profound,

the shouting at the wedding when your sister—

the bride—and my brother—the groom—disappear,

smiling inside the shouting sound.