DO WHAT I SAY

No one listens to me.

She would never obey.

I know I have no charisma. But

do what I say.

In person, I’m not charming.

She didn’t show up today.

I put her betrayals in a poem:

Do what I say.

What I said she will now have to say

As she reads, silently, the poem.

This is an author speaking his play.

Internalize my lines. Read me.

Do what I say.

I WISH I STILL LOVED YOU

I know that love is the best state to be in.

Desire made the Greeks and Romans Greeks

and Romans. Desire makes the makeup run.

Desire is why old music leapt over rooftops

and improvement made sure improvement got done.

Love made the eye hit home runs and shoulders type love poems in the candle dark.

I love when love first loves. That first spark.

And a million flames afterwards. Interest

panting after interest. News fresh and exciting.

The thrill when the invitation is inviting.

God it was good to love you. But evil love

has consolidated power. Every contest

(Jeopardy, sports, politics) is rigged. Philosophy has surrendered

to short term gain.

Excellence exists in small videos of the past.

Contemporary life is lonely and insane.

I listen to Mozart for hours. I’ve finally accepted your

prophecy. You told me love wouldn’t last.

The madness of the new is running downhill.

And if I object, I make it worse, still.

THE AMBER HEARD TRIAL: GOSSIP VERSUS ART

Johnny’s lawyer and his ex.

HEARING the closing arguments of the Johnny Depp trial and seeing the mostly pro-Depp comments online, I—(Scarriet (2009—) was moved to comment. Keep reading. If you care about art and culture, you won’t be disappointed.

IN a trial of essentially Hollywood hearsay, why not err on the side of defending the woman?

WHO are these millions of losers (a great deal of them women) defending a powerful husband in a deeply screwed-up marriage—from its very beginnings?

WHY are Pirate fans passionately sure they know the important evidence, when everyone can clearly see the story of the marriage in question is murky and inscrutable?

DEPP himself doesn’t remember things he did—and for which (in writing that passes as evidence) he passionately apologized to Heard for. Yet you feel you can occupy Amber Heard’s head and know everything that happened? Never mind that you don’t know these two individuals in every aspect of their secret existence. Yet you seriously believe you know everything that happened? Really?

WE don’t know enough to defend Depp—even if in our gut we want to like him, or want to believe him, or, just in general, based on our own experience, we want the world to understand “women can be bad, too.”

SHOULD one believe the spouse who was less discrete, simply because they recorded more stuff, or had more sycophants willing to testify for them? Both were violent, both threw things, both used humiliating revenge tactics to get even, both practiced psychological abuse—and no outsider can possibly be sure of which tally of abuses within the marriage favors the other. What is the reason, then, for strenuously believing the more famous spouse and his sycophants—unless one is a sycophant (or a misogynist) oneself? Why humiliate yourself by telling the world you belong to “Team Depp?” Have you no self-respect?

TAKING Johnny’s side in this trial might feel to the exceedingly moral akin to the rhetoric of men who are pro-choice—for the wrong reasons. Even the most controversial debates can be stopped in their tracks when confronted with the spiritual simplicity of the saint: why did you pick this person to love—and not love them? The saint will occasionally wander into online mob battles, but when, these days, has this ever had an effect?

HOWEVER, this is not really the larger point worth making. There is a much more important aspect to the Depp trial, which I will get to in a second.

JOINING in the real-time, online, discussion—where one is inclined to make brief, witty, remarks–this dispassionate reporter and Scarriet editor felt adrenaline, road-rage, excitement—and guiltily blurted out comments like the following:

Johhny’s hot, dark-haired, lawyer, trashing his blonde ex! Oh this is good! A new entertainment genre! LOL

Confused people think he’s the victim. How sad.

Hollywood hearsay. Depp’s tanking career blamed on his wife. Just pathetic, Johnny.

No one forced you to marry her, Johnny! It was your choice. Own it. If you were a bad husband…that’s on you.

I joined the mob.

Was that me?

I have to own it. It was.

I don’t feel too bad about it. It was temporary.

I noticed how thrilling it felt; how it interfered with my usual calm demeanor. I didn’t like this.

I’M happy I was self-aware enough to take stock of this.

I also understood much of my anti-Johhny animus was born from my perception that Amber had less defenders—my sense of chivalry had been awoken; I am not strictly, necessarily, pro-Amber or anti-Johhny.

I also realized my allegiance could swiftly change if it suited my argumentative powers, and, again, this was a good thing to notice about myself.

THE fine arts once served this purpose—capturing humiliating gossip impulses we all have, and enlarging them and transforming them into more reasonable discourses. The arts need not fear lowbrow events (such as the Johnny Depp trial)—all that matters is our response to them. Great art traditionally uses popular subjects as its food.

BY moving away, at rapid speed, from history painting towards abstract painting, early 20th century Modernism revealed its reactionary nature. High-brows may protest all they want, but artists like Kandinsky and Schoenberg represent cultural lobotomy—of course such impulses always attract many; killing brain cells is associated with the pleasure (and even the mob-like ecstasy) of drunkenness. Evil is abstractly and physically pleasurable; it is a wonder that good ever wins.

THE last, and most important thing to notice: the very genre itself of online commenting induces one to be aggressive and one-sided. Mob mentality is real.

THE essay format finds me (as you may have noticed) in a calmer state. A lengthier medium encourages a thoughtful person to argue against herself. This is very important.

REFLECTION itself is inhibited in the briefer, mob-communication, medium.

EDGAR Allan Poe, in his “Philosophy of Composition,” asserts that the duration of an ideal poem is crucial.

TOO-obvious points, which the learned overlook on account of their overly proud and sophisticated nature, was the learned and popular Poe’s specialty.

TOO short, the poem is unable to make a proper impression; too lengthy, the poem wearies us. Poe settled on 100 lines as a good length for a poem to win over both the popular and the critical taste. “The Raven” is 108 lines. With diminished modern attention spans, with the increase of academic importance per the muse, who knows what the ideal length of a poem is now? “The Waste Land” is about 400 lines. The “Red Wheelbarrow” is almost without lines, and can be measured more in characters, like a Twitter post.

POE is a pebble thrown into the pond of living literature; the “Poe-effect” we currently live in features the reactive landscape of high-brows offended by Poe’s learned simplicity: the “Wheelbarrow” is considered learned out of spite, as is the mediocrity of so many loose, modern, poets like WC Williams.

THE Depp trial was lengthy—and has attracted mobs of “learned experts” who can boast in great detail their allegiance—but the Twitter-length post is generally how these “experts” express themselves. Even though the trial is long, the medium of expression about the trial is short.

ART CRITICISM is valuable to the appreciation of poetry, or anything, really; it is the length of response which makes us civilized, or not.

POE was right.

DOES this mean we should censor brief reactions to anything?

WHAT an interesting idea!

IMAGINE an online platform that allows not posts of a certain minimum length, like Twitter (the realm of mob behavior) but only allows posts which meet an upper limit of lengthy (therefore thoughtful) response?

TRUE, “brevity is the soul of wit,” and empty heads will prattle on at length. So there’s that.

HOWEVER, brevity is also the soul of rudeness and stupidity—and the stupid cannot possibly fire up a mob if they are forced to lay out their “reasoning” for any reasonable length of time.

LET us have an online platform guided by the Poe rule. Let us be legislated by genius rather than mobocracy.

ONLINE chat must be “Raven”-length.

Civilization will return.

THE MODERATE CONSCIENCE

Pleasure and conscience—they decide

the rules of the debate and the debate.

Be thoughtful when you pick your side.

Pride knows it’s always too late.

Your view, known passionately to friends,

Is the topic of this neutral poem—

which has no pride. I can still make amends.

Pleasure will kill to get its way;

pleasing them is the only way this poem pleases.

Conscience is more circumspect.

I sinned, I sinned, but I will never say.

Conscience and pleasure, alternating breezes,

cool me in private. Let conscience have authority.

I practice pleasure, but you, conscience, have my vote.

Pleasure’s mobs, I fear, will sink my pleasure boat.

A PERSON

Love is a person. When we cannot love,

there is always a person to blame.

Thomas, for instance, who thought less of you than fame.

Love is a person—the ears, small. With a simple inherited name.

Love’s not your psychology. Not the complex world and its mess.

Love’s a person. Who lives at a certain address.

Look at them, who died fanatically, in unison.

The orders came from a person.

W.H. Auden walked in the shade

under the trees William Shakespeare made.

Mr. Graves is visiting Mr. Poem now—

Poem. (He loved you but you didn’t know how.)

Leaving behind the gods (Love was a lesser one),

they replaced the gods with One (who became three).

There are persons who think religion is nonsense—

I saw this in my friends’ poetry,

but none of them regard themselves as gods.

That will take some evolving—from gods to God

and back to gods, but, this time, you

will be the god—

and run in the sunshine of the mountains.

I remember who you were: less afraid

to die than I was. It was hot even in the shade.

I was high in the mountains, following you.

But I was afraid.

THE STRATEGY OF WE WHO ARE GOING TO DIE

The strategy of we who are going to die

partakes of immortality or sleep.

When confronted with the worst horror,

we kill—or kiss—the creep.

Creation is a going from here to there—

“there” has a heartbeat, too.

You’ll find me listening here,

hoping it’s the same old you.

The strategy of one who is going to die

resembles the hope you had

before you dreamed of happiness

fighting against the sad.

Creation, if its creation, really cannot change.

The smile I saw in your snapshot is almost out of range.

ON THE BLUE LINE, BOSTON

Nothing is made for close inspection.

The small lawns are neat.

The street goes in the right direction.

The train, despite the bad news, takes you home.

A passenger’s perfume reaches you from far away,

no need to get too close to judge.

The citizens are not attractive, but they breed.

The government’s bridge will not budge.

You can reflect, but there’s no need.

You’ll get to experience the far away, one day.

From a distance, even grotesque fate will be clear.

The plans will be laid out like this avenue.

Flaws and intimacy were never here.

OLD ROMANTICISM

Genius once visited the young

before life was saturated and sung.

The best poems, by any measure,

poets wrote at twenty-two,

immersed in the chores of plain life.

Factories today make the so-called new

after calculations and awards;

The old now anticipate

agendas children, frowning, must feel.

Genius stands aghast. It doesn’t visit.

Poetry feels unreal.

Once upon a time adults didn’t know

everything. They would wait

on the new—the child’s blank slate.

Offer neutral tools: reading, writing;

then stand back.

The youthful god was so exciting.

But now the old intrude, claiming indoctrination

cures indoctrination; the intrusive method

proves the intrusive method true:

Still repeating slogans,

the clutching poet, a windy blank at forty-two.

“SNL ACTORS SAY GOODBYE”

Not interested happens a trillion times an hour;

it is what save us from ourselves and others;

you cannot be interested in every flower—

that’s why we have the word, “flower;”

Words let us pretend that we pretend.

Love, they say, must always end—

the excitement diminishes

until we say, “you know what? I’m not interested.”

And to prove this, we go to war

just to prove we’re not interested anymore—

and this allows us to pretend

we accrue interest from beginning to end,

getting richer because a tiny hole

receives the light-which-contains-the-world,

amusing in storage the slow-gazing soul,

“world” a word to pretend the world exists,

“soul” the word which means, “look, I’m really not interested,”

for this is what enriches us today.

“Not interested” saved my life.

Oh God! now trillions are interested.

Can you please go away?

POETRY WITHOUT CLOUT, OR, TYPES OF BAD POETRY, PART TWO

Robert Lowell ruled mid-20th century poetry. Privileged, no fiction, crazy, avoided rhyme. Perfect.

What’s poetry? Names of race horses.

The necessarily accidental is important to poetry, just as it is for any pleasurable human activity.

J.V. Cunningham (1911-1985) is given 3 pages in J.D. McClatchy’s 560 page The Vintage Book of Contemporary American Poetry (McClatchy was a long time professor at Yale and editor of the Yale Review).

Cunningham, the rhyming, court jester, poet among the prose poetry royalty of this post-High-Modernism 20th century-defining anthology, is represented by 2 poems and some epigrams.

Here’s Cunningham’s first stanza from “For My Contemporaries” (reprinted in the volume); the quatrain serves as an ironic epitaph for the book and its 65 poets:

How time reverses
The proud in heart!
I now makes verses
Who aimed at art.

The irony is that “verses” are not “art” since the Pound/Eliot/Williams revolution a hundred years ago. Cunningham, the oddball rhymer, has failed to make “art,” and now merely makes “verses.”

When McClatchy’s anthology came out in 1990—during the glorious beginnings of MFA America, this was surely how these verses were read: Poor Mr. Cunningham, versifier, admits he failed at “art.”

Today, we can read these lines as a sly prophecy: time punishes the “proud” who “aimed at art,” (“art” according to MFA tastes) the “proud,” in the end, forced to admit poetry is “verses.”

There is some verse in this anthology—Roethke, for instance.

McClatchy’s high-minded and reconciling introduction begins:

“There is no need for any anthology to choose sides. No critic has to deploy our poets into opposing battle lines with names like Paleface and Redskin, or Academic and Avant-Garde.”

Hold on a second. The avant-garde is academic. “Paleface and Redskin” one ought to recognize as poetry criticism terms, such as “raw” and “cooked” or “ancient” and “modern.”

American poetry criticism has been timid since 1900—pushing real critics like Edgar Poe and William Logan aside as too fearsome or mean (honest talk apparently promotes those dangerous “battle lines).

Not only timid, but naive, for McClatchy’s battle talk assumes academia isn’t everywhere since Modernism’s climb to prominence in the early 20th century.

McClatchy goes on:

“Best just to duck: the field echoes with sniper fire from the poets themselves. Whitman complained he couldn’t stomach Poe’s “lurid dreams.” Dickinson wouldn’t read Whitman at all: she had been told he was “disgraceful.” William Carlos Williams railed at T.S. Eliot’s Waste Land for having wiped out our world as if an atom bomb had been dropped upon it.”

McClatchy assumes that Whitman dissing Poe is an issue for people outside of academia—it’s not. The man on the street today, if they look at poetry at all, is not saying to themselves, “Oh God, Whitman doesn’t like Poe!” It’s a purely academic concern. McClatchy’s second example is pertinent outside of academia—the morality of poetry—but notice this example is from the 19th century. In the third example we are back in the 20th century: it’s only an issue to a few inside academia that WC Williams felt “The Waste Land” was an “atom bomb.”

Richard Hugo (1923-1982), with 5 pages in the anthology beginning on page 194, wrote gritty, authentic poems about Montana working-class towns—when he was a professor. (University of Montana.) “Degrees of Gray In Philipsburg” begins:

You might come here Sunday on a whim.
Say your life broke down. The last good kiss
you had was years ago. You walk these streets
laid out by the insane, past hotels
that didn’t last, bars that did, the tortured try
of local drivers to accelerate their lives.
Only churches are kept up. The jail
turned 70 this year. The only prisoner
is always in, not knowing what he’s done.

The poem goes on for three more stanzas like this—it would make a great beginning to a hard-boiled detective novel, but as a poem, what’s the only thing we get?

“You” are having a really lousy time in Philipsburg, Montana.

We see in the short Vintage bio of Hugo: “Hugo was born and educated in Seattle. He studied there with Theodore Roethke, the strongest influence on his early work.” (Both were troubled men who didn’t live to be 60.)

Roethke was born in 1908, almost too old to be in this anthology, but perhaps McClatchy, in his ecumenical spirit needed to include “The Waking” with “Skunk Hour,” “One Art” and “Daddy,” some decent rhyming poems, among all the 20th century prose poems.

Or maybe the issue isn’t rhyme at all—Roethke taught Hugo; this is what’s important; respectful, institutional continuity.

Robert Lowell and Elizabeth Bishop, who open the anthology, privileged, and privileged to receive 20 pages apiece (most poets get about 5) were both teachers. Bishop taught at Harvard; Lowell was the first “name” poet to teach at Iowa and jump-start the Creative Writing Program era.

Creative Writing programs typically consist of two branches: Fiction and Poetry.

This leads to an interesting observation about contemporary American poetry.

Let’s forget about rhyme and form. It became increasingly irrelevant as the 20th century progressed. Writing students choose fiction or poetry. So what characterizes this “poetry” that no longer looks like poetry?

It makes sense that what’s most important for American poetry is that it be unlike fiction, or at least unlike what fiction often aspires to become—a film. Otherwise the MFA in poetry might just disappear—why couldn’t “poetry” students just get an MFA in writing?

Why get a poetry MFA? To learn the craft of rhyme and meter? Is that what Jorie Graham learned and subsequently taught? No.

What, then, describes the kind of poetry that we see in 1990’s The Vintage Book of Contemporary American Poetry?

Is this why poetry has become so unpopular? Why poetry these days has no clout? Look what it had to do and what it has to do (we are still in the MFA era): don’t be fiction and don’t be poetry—as it existed for centuries prior to the 20th.

I already mentioned Hugo (whose work in the anthology seems nothing like Roethke’s) and his poetry which reads like the first page of a hard-boiled detective novel set in Montana.

Is critically acclaimed poetry today nothing more than a kind of mentally defective fiction? Fiction, but fiction unable to be carried to completion?

The ballad is a poem that tells a story; but there are no ballads in McClathchy’s anthology of five hundred plus pages.

One does not get an MFA in poetry to learn to write ballads.

It seems the MFA in poetry is determined to keep “story” away, since students might be inclined to get a fiction MFA, instead.

Is there a kind of unspoken rule about poetry as comatose fiction? Fiction which deliberately fails as fiction? Richard Hugo can write a damn good introductory paragraph or two for a Montana mystery novel—therefore he’s a poet.

Richard Hugo’s poetry is depressing.

The introductory (or back-drop) rhetoric of hard-boiled detective fiction is commonly stark and moody.

Edgar Poe, creator of the template, begins one of his famous detective tales: “At Paris, just after dark one gusty evening in the autumn of 18__”

The master sets the mood with just a few words.

20th century poets generally did the same—but using far more words; perhaps because they had to write about something, but no actual tale was forthcoming?

Very few Americans are going to sit and watch a movie without a love story. Movies and novels need a love plot. Your fiction MFA student knows this.

Was MFA poetry, which began to dominate letters starting in the middle of the 20th century, concerned with love?

McClatchy’s anthology contains only a few pages of what could be called love poetry. There are but two love poems of the “I love you” variety—only two, in its 537 pages: “Having a Coke with You” by Frank O’Hara and “To Dorothy” by Marvin Bell, the latter of which may be the worst love poem ever, as it begins:

You are not beautiful, exactly.
You are beautiful, inexactly.

Robert Lowell sets the tone. In his 20 pages of poetry there’s one reference to romance: “too boiled and shy/and poker-faced to make a pass.” It isn’t until page 47 of the anthology that we get “I Knew a Woman” by Roethke, which seems more about sex than love, but in this anthology we certainly can’t be picky.

Audrey Lorde’s “Movement Song” (p. 414) opens with

I have studied the tight curls on the back of your neck
moving away from me
beyond anger or failure
your face in the evening schools of longing
through mornings of wish and ripen
we were always saying goodbye
in the blood in the bone over coffee
before dashing for elevators going
in opposite directions
without goodbyes.

“Over coffee before dashing…? This is OK but still rather reticent and indirect. Not the mad Romanticism of Diane Seuss (whose collection just won the Pulitzer).

There’s this from “Meditation at Lagunitas” by Robert Hass (p. 470) but can this even remotely be called love?:

There was a woman
I made love to and I remembered how, holding
her small shoulders in my hands sometimes,
I felt a violent wonder at her presence
like a thirst for salt, for my childhood river…
…It hardly had to do with her.

Yes, a poet can certainly stand above a man and a woman and make remarks about how they will never be one, as Hass does in “Misery and Splendor” (p. 472) but what is this really saying except ‘too bad, you guys?’ This might end a novel nicely; the poem hasn’t earned this ending, though; that’s sort of the problem:

They feel themselves at the center of a powerful
and baffled will. They feel
they are an almost animal,
washed up on the shore of a world—
or huddled against the gate of a garden—
to which they can’t admit they can never be admitted.


It’s a brutal scene—though it feels like a poetry invested in abstraction somewhat against its will.

The height of love in the volume is reached by Marilyn Hacker’s

If we talk, we’re too tired to make love, if we
make love, these days, there’s hardly time to talk.

Or this, from Hacker, with roaring rhetoric, a few pages later:

Tomorrow night the harvest moon will wane
that’s floodlighting the silhouetted wood.
Make your own footnotes; it will do you good.
Emeritae have nothing to explain.
She wasn’t very old, or really plain—
my age exactly, volumes incomplete.
“The life, the life, will it never be sweet?”
She wrote it once; I quote it once again
midlife at midnight when the moon is full
and I can almost hear the warning bell
offshore, sounding through starlight like a stain
on waves that heaved over what she began
and truncated a woman’s chronicle,
and plain old Margaret Fuller died as well.

Or we could possibly consider these from the anthology, love: “Daddy” by Plath or Sexton’s “I have gone out, a possessed witch…” or Louise Glück’s

It is not the moon, I tell you.
It is these flowers
lighting the yard.

I hate them.
I hate them as I hate sex,
the man’s mouth
sealing my mouth, the man’s
paralyzing body—

Not really.

C.K. Williams has a poem on suburban pals lured by a pimp for cheap, quick sex in NYC; the poem lurid, passive, reactive, helpless.

The overriding tone of the Vintage Book of Contemporary American Poetry is learned, luxurious, meditation tied up by sadness. Here is Richard Howard, one of those masters born between 1925 and 1929:

Rezzonico…Disraeli…We realize our task.
It is to print earth so deep in memory
that a meaning reaches the surface. Nothing but
darkness abides, darkness demanding not
illumination—not from the likes of us—
but only that we yield. And we yield.

The poets of this volume have all been trained not to be Romantics; a few rebel, but mostly they shy away from poetic devices that moan and sing. The anthology meticulously talks and talks and talks.

When did American poetry feel comfortable with the fact that the Keats cat and the Shelley cat and the Byron cat no longer dwell in the household, just because a guy named Ezra told them to go? When did poetry become supercilious chat, baroque chatter? If perception in life is nearly all, think how ruthlessly perception rules poetry: when rejection of rhyme came to be seen not as a palace assassination but as an exhausted queen doing loads of purple laundry, “I’m too busy to rhyme,” American contemporary poetry must have begun to feel like a starving person listening to financial advice—on how to give endlessly to charity.

How does one bypass all the usual academic netting and state plainly the gist of what troubles professional contemporary American poetry? I may be failing, but I hope we can see it’s necessary more than one person try.

Modern American poetry has long needed a wake-up slap. Which, of course, will not do any good. Time must deal with poetry.

What do we get in McClatchy’s excellent anthology? Character development, psychological insight, plain talk, insights, philosophy, humor, love? Not really. We get something more effete and specialized. The chaste and the vocabulary-heavy.

I hope it doesn’t sound too strange to say it plainly.

The voice in almost all the poems in the Vintage Book of Contemporary American Poetry is the same: the voice of a very wealthy person, cultured, delicate, shy, deeply self-absorbed, of a calm disposition, fond of secular iconography, passing memories, trinkets, country roads, and anxious to introduce us to a sky as it might appear at dusk…

Salem MA 5/20/22

RESTRAINT

The restraint it takes to be silent

when insane, gaslighting, villains provoke you

is the most glorious virtue in the world. Pity

the insane, but don’t be passive. Be restrained.

Do something stupid once—and the movie ends,

say goodbye to love, apologize to friends.

Virtue must swim against the tide.

Restraint reconciles the heart with the outside.

Don’t do that, which you think you can do,

unless you consider all that could happen to you.

I want you to consider yourself, that’s all.

Be superficial. Congratulate yourself that you’re calm and tall.

But don’t make this apparent to the small.

Do everything for yourself and by yourself.

Let others’ books sit heavy on the shelf.

Let them write and read.

Let them brag. They will have that need.

It took me a long time to know

this truth about everyone:

The wild animal of their ego.

Keep every person at bay.

Hold them accountable, or mostly accountable,

for every word they say.

Most of humanity is completely insane.

Be alone. At the movies. Or in the beautiful rain.

TWO TYPES OF BAD POEMS GOOD POETS WRITE.

Anthologies are my favorite way of reading poetry.

Authorial vanity cries out “Read my book! Get to know me! Immerse yourself in my book’s theme!”

I reply, “Have you written Paradise Lost? If not, let me return to The Vintage Book of Contemporary American Poetry (I am only fluent in English and don’t have much faith in translation) where I can read not only many poems, but many poets, and immerse myself in an era.”

In 1990 J.D. McClatchy, editor of the Vintage anthology just mentioned, assembled the best of Elizabeth Bishop (b. 1911) thru Gjertrud Schnackenberg (b. 1953), 65 poets in a not-too-heavy paperback—over 500 pages, which I purchased in 1999, and still not falling apart.

When was an entire book of poems, by one poet, been worthy of praise for all the lines in it? We probably need to go back to a small quarto volume by Poe or Tennyson.

Beyond Tennyson floating in dust or Shakespeare staged in heaven, a poetry anthology, light enough to peruse while holding it aloft in one hand, is the only way to properly commune with the Muse.

As I read my McClatchy (actually a gift to my wife, but between her subscription to Poetry and several other journals; recent purchases of Nikolayev’s translation of Pushkin, Steven Cramer’s latest volume; and the ten million novels she’s currently reading, I don’t believe she’ll miss it) I discovered good poems from poets I never had any interest in, and poems so bad they made me laugh. My laughter produced not a smidgen of guilt, since the anthologist selected only poets covered in poetry prizes—my mockery could never in a million years break down their highly credentialed immunity.

I will be guilty, however, in the eyes of a few of my readers (I am thinking of one in particular, a highly educated, avant-collecting, condescending, fellow) should I make these private feelings known, that I now take the liberty to reveal, chuckling a bit, I won’t lie, at the very thought of it.

Why isn’t Marilyn Hacker (pg 489) more famous? She writes like Byron. I think the problem is, in order to write like Byron, you must be Byron. Also, Hacker was born around the same time as John Lennon and Paul McCartney. Had she been born in 1842, instead of 1942, Hacker would be better known. No one really talks about her anymore.

There was just too much competition for a poet publishing in the sex, drugs, and rock and roll 60s and 70s—the worst time to be a poet in the United States. Hacker’s work is impressive—as reproduced in the Vintage Book of Contemporary American Poetry. Is she still risqué? That shouldn’t be the question. Is she good? She is, and accessible, too, unlike poets who eclipsed her, such as Louise Glück and Jorie Graham—poets we occasionally pretend to understand, but don’t. (Glück and Graham were model-beautiful in the 80s. Hacker was not.) It was a quieter and cooler world in the 1980s when Graham and Glück became known, a window of time for high-brow poetry to carve out a dignified and contemplative space for itself; the 60s rock culture, which had sucked all the cool out of the room for so long, had come down to earth. John was dead, Paul had a mullet. Poets could now be called on to deliver “Eleanor Rigby” and “A Day In The Life” vibes—in a place both more rarefied and more practical—the MFA as a ticket to poetic respectability was still real and fresh. The college protest was now less cool than college itself—the poets could smoke pot in college; they could have their cake and eat it.

Donald Justice (p. 210 in the Vintage anthology, poorly represented by mid-life crisis poems) was a poet (40 years old in 1965) swallowed up by the youth culture; old, he mentored Jorie Graham at Iowa—the critic William Logan learned under Justice at the same time; Logan, whom Graham admired, reviewed her first book.

In 1980, the original Modernists were dead, the Rock culture was exhausted, the larger culture had become corporate, cheap, goofy, and trite; it was time for academia and poetry to shine. Helen Vendler and Jorie Graham, who would have been buried and ignored in the 1960s, were somehow actual (gulp) stars in the 1980s. William Logan became the sybil who reminded the poets of the 80s and 90s that they weren’t really stars—because, well, they weren’t. Somebody had to be funny (rude?) and tell them.

Poetry died in the poetic 60s and gave birth to comedy in the non-poetic 80s. William Logan was SNL for what was left of the poetry public that the Modernists had chased away with their unsentimental theory and sophistication.

The New Critics—only one of its core members is represented, p. 67, Robert Penn Warren (b. 1905)—made a great deal of giving the study of poetry largely over to the text. Yet I can describe most of the poets in the 1990 Vintage anthology with a single gesture-–I don’t need words, and my summation refers to no text whatsoever. Imagine I am making the universal sign of sucking on a joint—thumb and finger planted on pursed lips.

One could learnedly can go on for hours about form and its relationship to content, the theories of the French, and Pound’s “make it new,” but hey you try reading the late night confessions of C.K. Williams, Robert Pinsky, Mark Strand, Robert Hass, Charles Simic, Gary Snyder, Robert Creeley, Allen Ginsberg, Richard Hugo, and Frank O’Hara without smiling knowingly at my gesture. So much for the authority of text-centered New Criticism.

The Vintage anthology is 65% white men, 30% white women—who published largely in the 50s thru the 80s.

It’s a record of weed.

We just couldn’t see it for all the Brooks and R.P. Warren tweed.

New Criticism was the only real educated influence on poetry in the 20th century, mingling the text-obsession of Derrida with the sandy grains of Imagism, a crashing wave that reached from the early days of the 20th Century—John Ransom, the T.S. Eliot of the American South, was born, like Eliot, in the late 19th century, to Debussy and the turmoil of the French avant-garde—all the way to the 1990s and its small End of History window where the inscrutable poetry of a Jorie Graham could mesmerize and soothe us.

There are two types of bad poetry.

One. A poem describes some well-known event in which the poet feels he is heightening or adding meaning to the event—but isn’t.

Two. A poem attempts to be metaphysical—no event is described, except accidentally, so the poet hopes the reader will not be able to judge whether an event is described well—or even at all—since that was not the intention.

The first example can be found in the Vintage anthology on pg. 521, in a poem by Edward Hirsch. The poem is called “Fast Break” and attempts to describe a basketball game.

A rebound: “gathering the orange leather/from the air like a cherished possession.”

The prose-poem’s line breaks and stanzas are supposed to replicate the quickness of the play (they don’t).

The failure of the poem increases in its attempt to find a final straw of meaning in its empty enthusiasm (“our gangly starting center”) at the end:

with a wild, headlong motion
for the game he loved like a country
and swiveling back to see an orange blur
floating perfectly through the net.

Edward Hirsch is a distinguished poet (even if in a pot-smoking era) and yet this may be the worst poem ever written.

The second type of bad poem is demonstrated on page 525 by Jorie Graham’s “Over and over Stitch.” Unlike Hirsch’s poem—which attempts to describe what is already real (sadly, “orange leather” for “basketball”) Graham takes the opposite approach, describing nothing at all:

Late in the season the world digs in, the fat blossoms
hold still for a moment longer.
Nothing looks satisfied,
but there is no real reason to move on much further:
this isn’t a bad place;
why not pretend

we wished for it?

The poet is being intentionally vague (here in the first 7 lines) hoping the reader will mistake vacuousness for philosophy. The poet isn’t going to let herself err in the direction of describing a basketball as “orange leather,” and look! she triumphs.

We might blame Graham’s distinguished teacher, Donald Justice, more than Graham’s privileged and highly educated background. Just look at this existential nightmare of a poem written and published by Justice himself and unfortunately reprinted by McClatchy in the Vintage anthology (p 210):

The Evening of the Mind

Now comes the evening of the mind.
Here are the fireflies twitching in the blood;
Here is the shadow moving down the page
Where you sit reading by the garden wall.
Now the dwarf peach trees, nailed to their trellises,
Shudder and droop. You know their voices now,
Faintly the martyred peaches crying out
Your name, the name nobody knows but you.
It is the aura and the coming on.
It is the thing descending, circling, here.
And now it puts a claw out and you take it.
Thankfully in your lap you take it, so.

I won’t quote the whole poem. You get the idea. The poem is embarrassing. “Faintly the martyred peaches crying out your name” is beyond bad. It’s laughable.

Back to Graham’s poem:

The bushes have learned to live with their haunches.
The hydrangea is resigned
to its pale and inconclusive utterances.
Towards the end of the season
it is not bad

to have the body.

The poet isn’t following Ovid any more than John Muir. We never thought of her hydrangea as doing anything in the first place; so when she first mentions the plant as being “resigned,” we simply don’t know what to think and quickly don’t care.

The final assertion that “the dry stalks of daylilies” mark “a stillness we can’t keep” only shows us the poet is at least consistent in never letting up from the poem’s dry observation that there is nothing that matters, whatever the poet might do or say. Her single-minded pursuit of not committing herself to anything recalls a haiku being stretched; a paralysis of purpose becomes the purpose. They also write who only stand and wait.

“The bushes have learned to live with their haunches.” Bushes are described as being, or having, “haunches”—childish, though not as bad as using “orange leather” to describe a basketball; it is the addition of “learned to live with” which self-consciously recalls the vacant theme: Nature’s OK, I’m OK, we’re OK; this is what moves the poem from merely mediocre to pot-smoking horrendous.

These, then, are the two faults good poets make: either they fail to describe something or, they describe nothing, but since a poem demands we say something—the second type of bad poem often becomes like the first, only ten time worse, because the flaws of the first become magnified by the strategies used in the second—to avoid the flaws of the first. Describing something is all a poem finally does, or fails to do—this dilemma, then, is the primal one; its failures are legion.

The more common type of failure—triteness and lack of originality, afflict the bad poet.

These two types of bad poems I have described here are important—because good poets so often indulge in them.

NINE POEMS AND THREE EPIGRAMS OF THE NEW ROMANTICISM

John Milton is John Keats.

Samuel Johnson is T.S. Eliot.

Literature repeats, just as happy thoughts commonly intrude upon sad ones.

Vermilion beauty is reached, but the sun brings a new day. New philosophers congratulate themselves. A shadowy sage announces, “You are not enjoying the spring! You are someone else!” Philosophy vomits a new stone. A city shudders. Romanticism and youth, together with Conscience panting after the Good, are mocked and overthrown at last. Or this is only hyperbole getting the last word.

Milton, writing an elegy for his college friend, Edward King, drowned, spends most of the following passage asking “valleys low” to do something. The educated will have no trouble understanding and enjoying poetry like this—resembling a race horse able to burn for the entire course. It is excellent, whether or not you “like” it. It is too fanciful for Modernists—the same ones who lament that modern life is estranged from nature, so how dare Milton commune with nature. Ah the intricacy of modernity. Eliot and Pound were not high on Milton.

Every poetry has faults—Poe pointed out for America’s readers that Milton babbling to, and with, the non-human was annoying. It was. Poe said Paradise Lost was too long—and he was not blaming Milton, exactly, but ourselves, since none of us, limited as we are physically, can be entranced by a poem for very long.

The old will influence, even if it’s not perfect, even if it’s sheared by modern shepherds. Keats learned from Milton. To learn from (and improve on) the past is a truism, which some damn, anyway, like the avant-garde, which prepares its feast on a very little table—or makes a large table for a small feast.

Here is the passage from Milton’s “Lycidas”—as far from the avant-garde as possible:

Return, Alphéus; the dread voice is past
That shrunk thy streams; return, Sicilian Muse,
And call the vales, and bid them hither cast
Their bells and flowerets of a thousand hues.
Ye valleys low, where the mild whispers use
Of shades and wanton winds and gushing brooks
On whose fresh lap the swart star sparely looks,
Throw hither all your quaint enameled eyes,
That on the green turf suck the honied showers
And purple all the ground with vernal flowers.
Bring the rathe primrose that forsaken dies,
The tufted crow-toe, and pale Jessamine,
The white pink, and the pansy freaked with jet,
The glowing violet,
The musk-rose, and the well-attired woodbine,
With cow-slips wan that hang the pensive head,
And every flower that sad embroidery wears;
Bid Amaranthus all his beauty shed,
And daffadillies fill their cups with tears,
To strew the laureate hearse where Lycid lies.
For so, to interpose a little ease,
Let our frail thoughts dally with false surmise,
Ay me! whilst thee the shores and sounding seas
Wash far away, where’er thy bones are hurled…

Keats could not have written “Ode To A Nightingale” but that he saw this passage—which is Romantic before any scholar said it was. The Metaphysical Poets had the silliness knocked out of them by their successors and self-conscious Romanticism kept the Miltonic luxury—even as the 18th century, in a bizarre detour through Johnson, condemned it. Just as the 20th century, in a harrowing road through T.S. Eliot, condemned it.

Is the following by Johnson or Eliot? It’s hard to tell.

“One of the poems on which much praise has been bestowed is Lycidas of which the diction is harsh, the rhymes uncertain, and the numbers unpleasing. What beauty there is we must therefore seek in the sentiments and images. It is not to be considered as the effusion of real passion, for passion runs not after remote allusions and obscure opinions. Passion plucks no berries from the myrtle and ivy, nor calls upon Arethuse and Minicus, nor tells of rough satyrs and fauns with cloven heel. Where there is leisure for fiction there is little grief.”

Dissociation of sensibility, in other words.

The writer continues:

“In this poem there is no nature, for there is no truth; there is no art, for there is nothing new. Its form is that of a pastoral, easy, vulgar, and therefore disgusting; whatever images it can supply are long ago exhausted, and its inherent improbability always forces dissatisfaction on the mind.”

What was thought to be the greatest lyric in English gets an ‘F.’

It is Johnson who tramples Milton’s flowerets, not Eliot, but it could have been either one.

It is not our intention to defend Milton.

No one needs to defend Milton—or Johnson.

I am not here to defend Romanticism—only to point out that literature is a roller coaster ride and Romanticism is now ready to trample Johnson—the Enlightenment genius and contemporary of Mozart—who dared to call John Milton’s exquisite lyricism in Lycidas “disgusting.”

Who else would dare? The amusement park of Letters is for your pleasure, but you don’t own the rides—only guys like Johnson do. You don’t know anything about this. You own an opinion the way you own a book—you bought the book; you did not write the book. You think what everyone else thinks.

But Scarriet is here to guide you.

Poe, unafraid to trash Milton, writes the following on the man who dared to trash Milton, Dr. Johnson:

“What is Poetry? — Poetry! that Proteus-like idea, with as many appellations as the nine-titled Corcyra! Give me, I demanded of a scholar some time ago, give me a definition of poetry? “Tres- volontiers,” — and he proceeded to his library, brought me a Dr. Johnson, and overwhelmed me with a definition. Shade of the immortal Shakspeare! I imagined to myself the scowl of your spiritual eye upon the profanity of that scurrilous Ursa Major. Think of poetry, dear B—, think of poetry, and then think of — Dr. Samuel Johnson! Think of all that is airy and fairy-like, and then of all that is hideous and unwieldy; think of his huge bulk, the Elephant! and then — and then think of the Tempest — the Midsummer Night’s Dream — Prospero — Oberon — and Titania!”

It would be silly for any of us to censor Poe as he damns Johnson—we are in a war, you twits!

Whether Poe is correct, or not, is beside the point.

Your opinion doesn’t matter to the gods. You collect only.

Dismissing Poe’s “elephant passage” on Samuel Johnson would be as useless as dismissing Lycidas, or dismissing what Johnson said about Lycidas—one hundred years before Poe and one hundred years after Milton. Poe was dismissed by Eliot one hundred years later. And now you cannot stop, one hundred years on, what is going to happen to Eliot, who used Johnson as a cudgel and now in turn will be beaten to a pulp by a Midsummer Night’s Dream.

For it is a dream—all literature is a dream! You cannot defend the poet who writes “honied showers” against the poet who writes about beefsteaks; but one day the spell will wear off and the poet who proudly rejected “vernal flowers” and wrote on ham will seem an ass.

It doesn’t matter who is winning the Pulitzer Prize these days, or what anyone is saying about anything.

In Letters, whatever Johnson and Eliot represent is now plummeting, and whatever Milton and Keats represent is on the rise—tempered, of course, by adjustments made over the centuries; the Romantics were not as artificial as Milton, but preferred him to Johnson, finding Milton thrilling, Johnson, pedantic.

Eliot turned his Samuel Johnson-Laser on Romanticism. Eliot, in turn, must fall, and we can see the nature of his destruction simply by looking at what Johnson wrote—and putting it in reverse.

“Where there is leisure for fiction there is little grief.” Here, in a nutshell, is Eliot’s “Objective Correlative,” a theory (obviously cribbed from Dr. Johnson) Eliot used to condemn “Hamlet.” This is what the genius dares—and you do not—in the service of these hundred year- swings. Shakespeare, himself, is censored.

Remember, Shakespeare’s poetry was not appreciated much in the 18th century (he was converted to a story-teller)—and there came a revival in the 19th century, and to be honest, Shakespeare as a playwright found popularity in the 20th century, but as a poet, his Sonnets were turned into soap opera; T.S. Eliot, as we just mentioned, damned him; and if we look at Understanding Poetry, the leading poetry textbook of the 20th century, Frost gets more attention than Shakespeare, Yeats just as much, and Shakespeare is discussed in many places as if he were a Modern—his “imagery” held aloft, the immortal Bard just a more emotional version of WC Williams. Even genius goes up and down every century, so inevitable are trends.

Romanticism has plenty of “leisure for fiction.”

And all the “grief” they want.

And why not?

Think about it.

What literary “theory” (the “Objective Correlative” or any one you choose) can possibly prevent words of the imagination—literature—from doing whatever it wants?

Let Milton be Milton—but not for one hundred years.

It’s time to be Milton again. Modified, of course. “Lycidas” perfected into the Odes of Keats, and then further modified.

The new Romantic poets of the middle 21st century may not be that great. That’s not the point.

Whenever has “the green turf suck the honied showers,” “beside the white chickens,” “angry fix,” “bag full of God,” or “Does my sexiness upset you?,” been good enough that the new cannot mock it?

The New Romanticism is even now arriving.

Think of the distinguished and praised poems of the 20th century—they had no time for “leisure of fiction;” they were anxious to give us the real—and with it, tremendous grief.

Let’s take three: “Prufrock,” “The Waiting Room,” and “Supermarket in California.”

In Lycidas, Milton describes “grief” with the “leisure of fiction.” The sorrowful delight of Milton’s extended “leisure” includes flowers of “white pink.”

In all three of the 20th Century poems we get darkness as the impulsive force. The 20th century played in a grave.

Eliot: “the wind blows the water white and black.”
Bishop: “The waiting room was bright/and too hot. It was sliding/beneath a black wave…”
Ginsberg: “…and stood watching the boat disappear on the black waters of Lethe?”

Eliot’s poem has a “patient etherised upon a table” and a “bald spot.”
Bishop’s poem features the “horrifying” breasts in National Geographic and pain in a dentist’s chair on a dark winter day during World War One.
Ginsberg gives us a “headache” and a homeless guy “eyeing the grocery boys” in a supermarket.

Some say this is “progress.” But is it?

It’s poetry writing as far away from Milton as possible.

There’s no progress in poetry.

What we choose to include in a poem can only be a matter of taste, not science, since what exists outside the poem is not impacted by the poem. Has there ever been a headache, in Milton’s or Ginsberg’s day, which knew a poem, or was known by a poem, or was cured by a poem? We cannot remove the “headache” from Ginsberg’s poem without changing it irrevocably—what is essentially a meaningless bridge between life and poetry (a “headache”) is, no one can deny, essential to the poem. Therefore it follows that poetry exists as its own product, within its own rules and influences, within a “tradition”—not in the world—which the moderns were more adept at superficially recording, but only as it affects the poetry; any other conclusion by the modern poet is vanity.

Any poetry can be denied.

A movement cannot.

Romanticism can be defined simply, then. It is poetry not afraid of the “leisure of fiction.” Johnson, the anti-Romantic, says the “leisure of fiction” cannot have “grief,” and Eliot, with his Objective Correlative, agrees. But Romanticism finds nothing preventing “grief” from attending the “leisure of fiction.” It isn’t science. It’s literary taste—which, for scientific reasons, comes and goes.

The New Romanticism is proving the Moderns wrong. This is happening right now.

One hundred years from now, the New Romanticism will be wrong, again, for reasons no one will quite understand—even as long lines of “prophetic” professors and their theories will pretend they do.

Romanticism and its Samuel Johnson counterpart—which trade fashionable places every hundred years can also be looked at this way:

Romanticism: the World is newly and differently Glorious—my poetry will demonstrate this fact.

Dr. Johnson-ism: the World is Wretched—no artificiality can change that fact. Perhaps some glory will be glimpsed among the bald spots and the headaches, but we will know that glory is earned and legitimate, for that very reason.

Romanticism responds: poetry succeeds on its own merits and it doesn’t matter whether you add the flaws of the world or not—it’s the poetry that matters; the tedious pedantry that makes rules about what should be “put in” poetry to make it “less artificial,” will only in the long run, inhibit poetry.

Back and forth it goes. The argument is not as important as the back-and-forth.

The courting world brings flowers to the poem. Then gets tossed out.

Every one hundred years.

It was no good writing Romantic poetry, as some did, in the 1980s. It was still the 20th century. Pound lived until 1972. Many of us can remember 1972.

But something is going to happen in 2022.

Because it’s 2022—100 years since “The Waste Land.”

But Eliot won the Nobel in 1948. That’s only 75 years ago.

So we may need to wait another 25 years for the true New Romanticism. Poems on headaches, however, don’t seem to be the thing right now. The shift appears to be happening.

Here is a sampling of nine New Romantic poems and three epigrams, a hint of what will emerge with even greater force in the next few years. Scarriet guarantees it. The content is more or less modern; it’s the delicate formalism, the chaste emotionalism, combined with Romantic-philosophical sensitivity, which is the difference.

One could say what follows is really nothing more than Edna Millay or Edward Arlington Robinson or Donald Justice—the sort of earnest, tasteful, non-pretentious poetry that was appreciated in the 20th century, in spite of Romanticism on the wane. Fireworks and trumpets don’t necessarily accompany these one hundred years shifts; sometimes the archeological alteration appears after the fact, in the midst of scholarly digging. The distinction could be as subtle as this: Edna Millay and Donald Justice considered as major 20th century poets—rather than let’s say, Ezra Pound and WC Williams. Romanticism very well could be accused of saying, “It’s only poetry, and once you admit this, poetry is saved.” The shifts are not necessarily earth-shaking. Poe and Emerson were contemporaries—they reviled each other; it was Emerson, precursor of Nietzsche, who insisted, seer-like, the poet is a god; Poe, herald of detective fiction, was merely the better poet. And yet…something unmistakably human—not watered down by fetish, politics, or pretense, of the low or high kind—stains the writing of the New Romanticism.

DAN SOCIU (trans. Thomas Graves, Ana-Maria Tone, Alexandra Gaujan)

AFTER SOME DAYS OF BEING DEAD

This tomb was built like a fort
but he still pushed out of it
and feverish, Lazarus stumbled to Earls Court
for some lemons and sparkling water.

The drizzling air was a fresh kiss
he breathed in greedily—
in the crowd he smiled stupidly, like me,
because I went thru something like this.

A man just risen has a special gravity.
Women, kids, feel it—even dogs pulled
their owners closer and it was remarkable—
the vending machine gave him water for free.

NIMIC NU MAI E POSIBIL

Nothing is possible anymore between me
And a nineteen year old girl, just as nothing
was possible when I was nineteen
years old. I listened to them carefully, they ruffled my hair,
they’d gently reject my touches, no, Dan,
you are not like this, you are a poet. They came
to me for therapy, they’d come with their eyes in tears
to the poet. I was a poet and everyone was in love
around the poet and none with him.
The poet would go out every evening
quaking like a tectonic wave and
in the morning he’d come back humiliated
in his heart—the quakes moving
for nothing, under uninhabited regions.

TWO PAPER LANTERNS

two paper lanterns
flying over the sea
one is lost
beyond the horizon
into the unknown
where only planes
fly on

two paper lanterns
one near the shore
still shimmering
the other far
barely in sight
which one is
the finer lantern

the one you see
or the one lost
where only planes
flew on?

THOMAS GRAVES

CLOUDY IN THE CITY AND EVERYTHING IS COLD AND GREY

You are superior to me because you are obscure.
No one quite knows what your poetry means
and this gains you sophisticated followers,
nonetheless shy when questioned.
Rattling the New York Times in the beginning of the day,
they feign surprise when I accost them with tears.
Is this a bullet train? Or is the driver drunk?
When do we arrive in Swampscott?
The commute home, when you are tired,
calmly surrendering to the motion of the train—
a mass of hurry—is a rich feeling. Out of the corner of your eye,
a torn ticket. A slightly windy sky.

THE HUG

When we finally hug I know
It will hurt you, even as you love
In the forgiveness of the hug,
Because, to forgive, you were so slow.
Maybe there will be no hug,
Since friendship and forgiveness are as irrational as love.
Maybe we waited too long;
Now we are weak in ratio to how much our love was strong.
You miss my friendship. I know
You miss my friendship, the hug
Will be that; our passionate love
Hid the friendship, so the hug
Will be a feeling and a symbol of that,
Yet who knows that friendship and sex are not exactly the same
When, after years, you hug the one who broke your heart, and call them by their name.

A SIGH SINCERELY SIGHED

I saw a lady in an emptying train, sighing.
Troubles are infinite,
But when you see someone sigh, sometimes you know why.
The exiting passengers filed past the lady;
She was in no hurry to leave her seat.
She was sitting there sighing, this lady;
Had she sighed to her lover, it might have been sweet.
But this was no sigh of love. The lady
Was no longer young, and the lines
On her face, I could see, had come
Only in the past few years.
Everyone wants to be beautiful and young.
This is why she remains in her seat,
And the sigh she sighs is more sad than sweet.
She knew she would never be young, again.
Some miseries are greater than others.
Age is the worst thing that happens to us.
But something tells me, I don’t know why,
I stopped for a moment, when I heard her sigh,
When I sighed, because she sighed, I thought,
As I left the train, in the station, I thought,
The world is going to happen again,
With the very same ladies, and the very same men.

BEN MAZER

DELIRIUM

I hear my mother rattling in the sink,
though I am loose in dreamy marble halls,
my sense of time is present, and I think
that comfort ravages the castle walls.
Night is as tall as those who are within
should wish to speak, of anything at all,
with fever burning underneath the skin,
to whom infinity could be so small.
I fall to earth in my delirium,
and wake to life to find I’m being shot
by someone who was real but now is not,
a skinny robber, canceling out the sum.
Dad’s in his parka in the cold garage;
I’m strangely comforted by this barrage.

THE SUN BURNS BEAUTY

The sun burns beauty, spins the world away,
though now you sleep in bed, another day
brisk on the sidewalk, in your camel coat,
in another city, wave goodbye from a boat,
or study in an archival library,
like Beethoven, and thought is prodigy.
Do not consume, like the flowers, time and air
or worm-soil, plantings buried in the spring,
presume over morning coffee I don’t care,
neglect the ethereal life to life you bring.
O I would have you now, in all your glory,
the million-citied, Atlantic liner story
of what we were, would time come to forget
being so rich and passing, and yet not covet.

ST. MARTIN’S LANE

Remember when we went to see St. Martin’s Lane?
We huddled in Charles Laughton’s room
just as I huddled there with you,
shivering. Popcorn for dinner. Breath like fog.
We followed Charles out to the London streets
without ever stirring from our seats.
We could have worked an act up for busking,
I might have even kissed you for the asking.
You were so still, sitting next to me,
covered by the flickering reflections
of the inhuman mechanical projections
of the original camera’s inspections.
The darkened rain, the poverty of gloom,
were only ours, stuck in a little room.
But when the film ends, and we leave our seats,
it’s pouring outside, and the whole film repeats.
(I too have often followed Sylvia Sidney
to a small diner for some beans and kidney.)
These fantasies are real. Our life is real.
Our quiverings half-concealing when we feel.
Our waverings aligned with electricity and steel.
Who do we thank for bringing things to order?
Charles Laughton, Vivien Leigh, Alexander Korda.
When the film’s over, we have grown up too fast,
like Barbara Stanwyck’s daughter in Stella Dallas.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The ache to kiss her like the ache to kick the ball found on the path

—Dan Sociu

Intelligence is panic. Imagination is panic that sleeps well.

—Thomas Graves

A greater amount of emotion is the effect of a greater work of art.

—Ben Mazer

The sampling could have included others (who have appeared in Scarriet, or poets you like) but the above features what must be considered the core of the New Romanticism right now, its Shelley, Coleridge, and Byron. Sociu, Graves, and Mazer.

Salem, MA 5/14/22

A MILD REJOINDER FROM WILLIAM LOGAN

Ben Mazer in Romania, taken by Tom Graves

Scarriet supplies, deliciously, delightfully, a necessary alternative to the banner raising that often passes now for criticism. Still, Tom was wrong to state that I haven’t reviewed the poet Ben Mazer because he’s published by a small press. (I’m not sure who gave him secret access to the contraption of whistles and gears that compose the Rube Goldberg machine of my criticism.) I’ve reviewed a fair number of small-press books over the years, and I look seriously at any book a press sends me. If most of the books I’ve reviewed have come from presses mid-sized or larger, well, those are the books that provoked me. Show me a brilliant book by a press I’ve never heard of, like Melissa Green’s chapbook from Arrowsmith Press; and I’ll review it instantly—even though by the time I received that book it was out of print.

—William Logan

Scarriet’s “Fame and Literature” 5/8/22 which I wrote, said the following:

“Is this essay’s indictment meant to deconstruct not only your feelings, but literature and fame? Like the infinite—an idea that may, or may not, finally exist (does the universe go on forever?)—fame is untouchable; it is the constant in my equation. You, the inconstant one, with the rest of the hypocrites, having your frothy opinions about which poetry is “good” and which poetry you “like,” find your anchor in fame—in the vast poetry pecking order of fame. Ben Mazer has published many books of poetry, but none with a major publisher, so William Logan will not write on him. Logan is famous for his sharp critical teeth—but his teeth chew on what others think, not thought. He returns from the hunt hauling big game; anything less would be embarrassing. William Logan makes no exception to his reviewing rule; even he lives, like all of us, by fame—from which poetry cries and is indistinguishable.”

In the attempt to hammer home my theme that literature is fame—notices, publications, readership—and assuming that if this is true, the pecking order of fame must also be true, I imprisoned William Logan, the great critic, in the magnetic field, with everyone else. There is no individual voice quite like William Logan’s, and I’m only too happy to let him walk away, unharmed, from my pit and my pendulum. Williams Logan is one individual who is always welcome to annoy my philosophy.

When publishing poetry today is like tossing a pebble into the grand canyon, it is good to keep in mind that Criticism is poetry’s light—my poems dwell in my heart and crawl into books with my name on them, dwelling with darkness and flattery—until Criticism comes.

Who have our critics been? Wise, beyond doubt, but too often too wise for the honest, particular review. Where do we go for the honest review? Important question.

Most literary scholars are proud, like Emerson. They don’t stain themselves by reviewing. Harold Bloom? Untrustworthy oratory. Helen Vendler? Charitable and humorless. Marjorie Perloff? Theoretical. Flies a banner.

Why is William Logan of world-historical importance?

Because he is a Critic who reviews. Honestly, and with humor. And lives to tell about it.

Good, independent reviews are good for the ecology. Bloviating manifestos rarely add green to the environment.

Which literary figure in our day is going to last? I’m putting my money on William Logan.

THE FAKERY THERE IS THE FAKERY HERE

I once fell madly in love with a face

but faces look strange now. Why did I care

so much for a face? I’m interested in the ad

which shows two people hugging

and that person smiling. Now it is clear.

The fakery there is the fakery here.

Life imitates art—yes, the cliché is true.

The soul is not in the life. People adrift.

Bad haircuts. The persistence of the bad life

mocking Romantic ideals. Now it is clear.

The fakery there is the fakery here.

The fakery in the fiction is repeated

in the words we lisp in life. The gestures

that appear to matter! What a perfect theme

for my poem. It’s the dream and the dream!

Pathos equally in both places! Now it is clear.

The fakery there is the fakery here.

FAME AND LITERATURE

Emily Dickinson—hidden away as fame; childless, but mother of us all.

Most poets have—even published ones—very few readers. Even the supposedly famous poets these days have no public, really. The situation of poetry is nearly a crisis—but enough of that. There’s already a surfeit of crisis-rhetoric today. I’m not talking here about how rotten and cheap and prosaic contemporary poetry is—my point here has nothing to do with that. The point of this Scarriet essay is even more embarrassing, if that’s possible: literature is fame; the two are synonymous.

What I say is true. Fame and literature are the same. Pound and Poe—who couldn’t be more different—understood this; the navigation a poet travels to become famous is the poetry, is the whole subject matter of the poet, is the very poet himself.

The two (poetry and fame) cannot be separated.

Is this a cruel thing to say?

I’ll be honest. I published a book on Ben Mazer’s poetry because he was the most famous poet I knew. Mazer—Romantic, avant-garde, it makes no difference—possesses a shadowy, but not quite an actual, sense of what I’m talking about.

I don’t know anyone who does.

I’m not speaking of personal ambition, with mere pleasure as the goal.

Fame and Literature are one. It’s such an obvious fact in the blatant way I am expressing it that even Scarriet didn’t understand it until the insight hit us yesterday—greatly obvious truths remain hidden to the sophisticated, and even published or unpublished cabbie poets who write about “real life” are sophisticated; the very act of being a poet, no matter how humbly, gives one that sophistication which bars one from the obvious truths. You feel it in your bones, sure, but you don’t come out and say it as I am saying it.

Scarriet specializes in too-simple-to-notice truths. Poe was murdered. The “Dark Lady” is a pun on black ink and the sorrowful nature of the written word. “Modernism” is a far-right, Creative Writing business.

Scarriet (since 2009, founded by Alan Cordle of Foetry.com as a mockery of Blog Harriet) is prominent enough to attract seekers after poetic fame. (Charles Bernstein hates me based on what I wrote about him in Scarriet, according to a trusted source.)

In my rather helpless musings on this—“who are you to ask me to take notice of you? I’m not famous; I can’t make you famous”—the truth that an educated, literary, public exists which I may inhabit, notwithstanding—the simple truth, ‘literature is fame,’ plucked me suddenly out of the crowd.

Emily Dickinson is literature—because we talk of her, not because of what she has written. Who among the sophisticated would take notice of this recluse today? None. Hypocrites! You wouldn’t. She would be admired by a few friends, as friends. She would have no literary existence. Those beyond her friends, those slightly more prominent in the poetry-pecking-order (“how many books have you published? where do you teach?”) would ignore her. You would. Don’t lie. Those who happened to see her work would say to themselves, “Hmm. No wonder she isn’t published. One just cannot emote in clumsy half-rhymes upon ‘immortality’ this way. Amateur.”

But now all is different for you and Emily; she is famous—therefore you convince yourself: “oh, this is good!”

Hypocrite. You have no idea whether any poetry is really good or not. Emily Dickinson is famous because others talk about her and because others talk about her, you do, too.

To hide the humiliating fact that her fame alone is what has converted you to the “truth” that she is now worthy, because our minds can convince us of anything—Keats is somewhat good, Cid Corman is good—you practice a liking, done automatically since it is part of the happy entrails-buzz fame (vicarious or not) bestows.

Is this essay’s indictment meant to deconstruct not only your feelings, but literature and fame? Like the infinite—an idea that may, or may not, finally exist (does the universe go on forever?)—fame is untouchable; it is the constant in my equation. You, the inconstant one, with the rest of the hypocrites, having your frothy opinions about which poetry is “good” and which poetry you “like,” find your anchor in fame—in the vast poetry pecking order of fame. Ben Mazer has published many books of poetry, but none with a major publisher, so William Logan will not write on him. Logan is famous for his sharp critical teeth—but his teeth chew on what others think, not thought. He returns from the hunt hauling big game; anything less would be embarrassing. William Logan makes no exception to his reviewing rule; even he lives, like all of us, by fame—from which poetry cries and is indistinguishable.

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Postscript.

We may still ask: why is ____ famous, but I submit the answer will never be forthcoming, for fame is its own reason for being, therefore analysis cannot enter. Does anyone doubt that God exists and is beyond us, forever clothed in mystery? And that the only living proof of God’s existence which can ever exist (every other proof learnedly and cleverly posited and just as learnedly and cleverly refuted) lies in a path and a small girl—why would you ever announce, cruelly, the end of that path? That she and all whom she loves will vanish and die? Why would you ever do that?

Is there any doubt that fame inspires all greatness to exist—the thrill of fame is the highest, the very opposite of being buried alive—which is the worst condition, as Poe intuited. Fame for the artist is when you know every exciting thing you do is watched and therefore you automatically rise to the glory of the great, lived, non-secret, secret—participation for its own sake.

Did the man who wrote “Yesterday” and “Let It Be” and “Eleanor Rigby” in the 1960s then write nothing of note as an experienced musician for 5 decades? Why did genius manifest itself only in that five year window of towering, exciting, miraculous fame? The answer is self-evident.

If you have ever seen the video of a famous person’s face through time—a fat faced child, the often homely youth, and then the first photo when they are “famous”—the beauty arrives like a miracle—the fire in the eyes, the facial muscles knowing what to do in the face, it is the receptivity of the now ferocious attention re-broadcast and seen as the light, the fire, the joy, the secret knowledge, eternal and ephemeral, of—fame.

Salem, MA, USA
5/8/22

IN EXACTLY TWELVE SECONDS I’LL BE SAD

In exactly twelve seconds I’ll be sad—

and then in twelve seconds I’ll be happy.

You think I’m joking? When I’m in love

I switch between happy and sad

every five seconds—this excites but exhausts me,

so I’m not in love long—I drive my boyfriends mad.

When I’m relaxed and alone

I’m happy for two long minutes, the wheel

slows down. It’s peaceful and unreal.

These shifts of mood are profound—

though it makes me appear shallow. History

and philosophy discussions have no sound

but Nature Shows on bees draw me in;

my thoughts are gigantic and fast—

I laugh at professors who think they know the past.

I sleep with the old who think they’re smart.

I love to experience the broken, brittle heart

attached to a mood languidly suffering.

GET OUT

Successful love is a good, long conversation

and because love seldom works out

there are stories, poems, and plays—

the poet talking to those he doesn’t know—

because love between him and another failed.

The paradox: when you lose at love,

you write those songs others call love,

which are quite the opposite, since lack of love

caused them to be.

Take this poetry.

They say I’m creative. My imagination

is lending fire to yours. No. I’m lonely.

I failed before and I’m failing again.

My creativity is the child of failure

and nothing can satisfy you here.

Apologize to the one you love. Leave this poem.

Get out, get out.

NOW I UNDERSTAND

Every library, church, and university,

the truths which call to me silently

as I drift through a museum,

all my friends’ conversations, the movement

of animals looking for food: all told me

what I couldn’t face; even my own poetry,

hectoring, moral, sad,

was trying to tell me what mom and dad

both told me once, a long time ago.

Libraries, churches, schools, my poetry:

an endless reflecting pool of superfluity.

Yup. Now I know.

EXPERIENCE

What is the most important experience to have

that we never have? Sleep.

Did that make you laugh? Apply it to life.

There. Now you can weep.

If I were impolite, you’d always see me crying.

Sleep and love don’t work when any of us are trying.

But sorrow? Consider yesterday. Or a certain tomorrow.

This morning was perfect poetry weather.

The tragic history of everything the preface,

as well as recent rain.

The sun had just risen, the buds were delicate,

the air chilly; April crowded the lane.

The cold lilac, the yellow forsythia were tall.

You told me, “now is a dream!”

Warmth and time were getting ready

to spoil it all.

CLOUDY IN THE CITY AND EVERYTHING IN APRIL IS COLD AND GREY

You are superior to me because you are obscure.

No one quite knows what your poetry means

and this gains you sophisticated followers,

nonetheless shy when questioned.

Rattling the New York Times in the beginning of the day,

they feign surprise when I accost them with tears.

Is this a bullet train? Or is the driver drunk?

When do we arrive in Swampscott?

The commute home, when you are tired,

calmly surrendering to the motion of the train—

a mass of hurry—is a rich feeling. Out of the corner of your eye,

a torn ticket. A slightly windy sky.

I WAS HOT

I was hot because I was cold.

I loved you when my love was old.

I ran passionately to you

being indifferent, too.

I had you like one has a cigarette

Craving a pleasure I couldn’t have yet

and could never have.

Was this music or love?

You watched me pursuing

Something that wasn’t you.

When we were screwing

you must have wondered what I was doing

that someone could easily do

to someone else who wasn’t you,

like every word of this poem written out

perfectly. There was no doubt

romance was put into a play

and it could have been us, who can really say?

I had to have you, but this made you sad.

It never quite seemed you—who I had to have.

What could I do when you mounted a rebellion?

I picked a flower. Dined on an onion.

I still sing and play a guitar

as if I know the song you are.

You are many songs. I played each one

with care. What else should I have done?

I don’t know, but in my mind

you are there. If you were kind,

you would hold someone in your mind

and I would not demand that I be anything but a replica of you,

loving me and mistaken, too.